Black Poetry : Lockdown of the soul

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  1. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A spark of the divine
    Existing beyond time
    Veiled in the flesh, locked in chains
    Once with the Universal Mind, now has a brain
    What pain it must be to watch mortality
    Threw the eyes of eternity
    What tears it would cry
    If but they didn't come out dry,
    To grow old in the flesh
    Yet in truth know no rest
    Watching from behind, the folly of life
    Never able to make things right
    Physically tied down,
    Unable to make a sound,
    Constantly shining light to the earth,
    To only die and be given birth
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ya vibing big tyme i see flow on !!
     
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    So Profound and Philosophical!

    Enjoyed this deep piece though I had to read it again...
    I like the ones that make me think! That is the sign of a Great work...
    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    loving this read..... food for thought
     
  5. Twofish

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    <and she awakens from her cage...>

    what's this another who shares this curse which I do dread
    having soul of Divine Goddess trapped inside this mortal head
    knowing profound premonition, but unable to express
    having deep determination yet confined to human flesh
    holding the Powers of Healing and Keys to the Great Mystery
    rejuvinating souls throughout centuries of history
    abandoned and contained inside this mind, these eyes, this name
    yet it eases my heart to know that you go through the same...

    1:heart:
    Empress aka 2fish
     
  6. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thankx $$RICH$$,msluciousb,
    herlove
    Yes Twofish
    We are one and the same...
    thankx
     
  7. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    short and to the point

    excellent scribe like always thunder
     
  8. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    love the flow of this. great read



    One
     
  9. Legacy21

    Legacy21 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very deep and profound introspection. Definitely feeling the emotions in this flow. Peace
     
  10. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lonelypoet,UbZoRbShUn,Legacy21

    thankx
     
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