Black Poetry : Lock N Load

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Tantrum, Nov 30, 2005.

  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im good to go
    Your vanilla okoo doke
    Vodka brown vanilla
    I got more flavors
    Than baskin you know
    I dont think you hear me
    I strong addiction
    Im a human elixur
    Time to get addicted
    Fen off my okee doke
    Lock N Load
    Puff it pass-Here you go
    Yes
    I got some flame right here
    Purple or Red
    Blue or Green
    I got the rainbow here
    If you didnt get it
    I got the blow right here
    They call me Kool Aid
    Thats why I got more flavors-Yeeeeaaah
    Yes
    Now you know the streets
    Its not the life you see on mtv
    Thats Fake
    My life the real real world
    Aint no surreal world
    This the Windy City Streets
    Ya Heard
    Aint nobody getting punk'd
    Try that ashton kutcher sh--
    Your life get snoofed
    Im real so now wtf
    You think you better than me
    Aint no Poetry without the T
    Lock N Load
    Stop N Go
    Breath N Stop
    Ill rock your dome
    I try to show you whats coming
    I know you done believe
    Thats why you keep on running
    Dumb and Dumber
    Ill smack that a-- a one hundred miles running
    And that aint nothing
    Its a skit before I knock out something
    See im the mirror reflection of my father
    And that makes me mad
    You Heard Me
    Use to beat on my mother
    While my brothrs in here stomach
    He would beat on my mother
    Now I just look at myself
    Like im looking at him
    Like I wish I could remove my skin
    Wipe away my flesh
    Its so scared can you hear it
    Tears you can feel them
    The misery a hurtful feeling
    But its real
    Realier than the cubes in your ear
    The chains on your neck
    Naw the life that you live
    I see
    Lock N Load
    I deliver my flow
    Im ready to go
    I set up shop
    Im selling poetry
    2 for 10
    Grab N Go
    Im hot like whoa
    You excited you never heard my flow
    Im the main course
    You a delictable
    Im three courses
    You just late night eadible
    I got hella flow
    When I speak from my mind
    Its a gift
    So here you go!!!

    Much Love Poets
    Love Support & Respect

    Sincerly,

    Tantrum "Last Of My Kind"
     
  2. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kool-aid?

    Well mr. Kool-aid...meet Ms. Rain-bow
    and I got more flavor, than you'll ever know

    this time you didn't step to just a plain old writer
    I drop a hell of a pen...a cold hard fighter

    ya didn't know what you was doing, when you steped in my den
    now the battle is on Bro...pen-to-pen


    ps...did I free-style or what?:laugh: ...oh well, next time I'll be ready!

    nice flow Tantrum, I enjoyed it, thanks
     
  3. spicybrown

    spicybrown Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'll give it 5 stars Tantrum...........Lovin your style. I enjoyed your show on the mic. You got what it takes:congrats:
     
  4. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A cold fighter
    Well heres the boxing ring
    Get your pen-Get your glove
    This could be a great thing
    You a rain-bow
    But it aint no pot of gold
    You tango
    Im Cash-I can stack it ten fold
    Flip so cold
    You pen aint ready
    You the the Titanic
    Im the snowman
    Iceburg I cause the darn panic
    I bring the darn damage
    Other poets just cant manage
    They flow just so manish
    The fight is on
    We can take it there
    Im the hype
    We can take it there
    You A Queen
    We gone leave it there

    Much Love Queen
    Thank You for the Love Spicy
     
  5. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo this is that real street sshh playa
    feeling ya flow dawg
    keeping it real
    i see


    DSS
     
  6. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    IM FEELIN IT TANT
    LOVE THA WAY U WUZ REAL WIT IT FA REAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  7. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You
    Da Street So'ja & Sista PlaT
    I has do do something that was
    Endering to me-It flowed with me
    Thank You 4 The Love
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte sweet mixture
     
  9. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You for the love
    Brother $$RICH$$
    I appreciate Brothers like you
    WE need more on here
     
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    you want to lock and load
    let me tell ya i got the moves that will xplode

    upon you
    my boo

    cause the girl is on fire
    can be your desire

    as i'll lock
    thing c*ck

    as it ready for action
    make a deposit boy ready for the transaction

    as it go through
    want you

    to get ready baby for this suga
    cause you'll be fulla

    of this hot supreme
    as i bring you to the extreme (of this)

    Lock and Load!!!!!!!!!!
     
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