Black Poetry : LOCK DOWN LOVE

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Day by day I take each step in depth
    On this rough road alone my way is you

    Thinking of moment we could share
    When you and I first met in a junction

    The flowers were in full bloom so beautiful
    and robins were singing our love tune

    You swept my feet off the ground
    And in an instant I seemed floating.

    I how i adored your world of peace
    one steps to farther our walk in time

    While exchanging pleasantries of warmth
    time passed so fast that we never noticed

    We're on another junction of affection
    Each has to bid the other "so long" bye n' bye
    And took paths of different directions.

    I have moved farther up but you linger
    with our junction now out of sight i still feel you
    closer to my heart then ever

    If we only could have stayed on the path written
    my love would not been loom in da spinner of doubts
    i fear we may never be less our future is up the road
    wit blind fate.


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    This was bittersweet, Rich.

    Minnie said it best. "Back down memory lane..." Sometimes, it's best not to go there! But I enjoyed this snapshot.
     
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    sho ya right , often we find ourselves looking in the glass of the past !
    thankz a million sis
     
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    To wonder how things could have been, if this would have been different or that. Great expression of those "deep sigh" feelings poet.
     
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    sometime sister watz we drop our ball and like the i wonder factor take over then we
    left with an envision of it all ......We hold on to things mentally like this.....Thankz for
    seeing inside the what could be.
     
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