Black Poetry : Lock Changed

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I told her "come"
    I would let her into my thoughts
    just - close the door behind her -
    and don't be overwhelmed by what she sees
    the 3rd eye glassed over
    with her name trapped inside
    or should I say sleeping //
    pleasure sedates even 2 syllable names
    or the game in which she shakes my thoughts
    and watch her drift to the ground
    revealing angels that mental projections
    have made of her / and the map to me are
    are laid for her

    I question
    would I be a fool to wait for her?

    she's trapped in my thoughts because
    the lock has been changed

    (C)2000 blakverb
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uh huh....

    ...ok, now I see CRYSTAL ~...

    And on another note; DOE RE MI FA SO LA TI DOE....this is tyght and just like the other piece -- 'I can read'! :wink:

    So much :heart: Blak!!
     
  3. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb

    DAYUM.... and you know that's a first for me.
     
  4. Hypnotize

    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    anotha platinum banger !!

    you know what ??
    sometimes people start tearing up stuff
    when they got " locked " in my mental -
    I have the locksmith on speed dial,
    cuz women STAY up in there -
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When you take that leap of faith to let someone in, sometimes it's next to impossible to let them back out. Nothing like a Blakverb drop.
     
  6. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the way this melts out a lava
    awesome tyte brutha verb !!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    now this speaks deep i like how you laid this...nice work indeed
     
  8. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx peeps...oh yeah...i'm back...

    blak
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome back glad to see ya around dis here part

    :bam: now where you been?
     
  10. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    yo....my brotha blak
    you betta be back for good this time man...
    we need your poetry up in this piece...word
    good concept on this joint....
    one love
    khasm
     
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