Quiet Poetry Lounge : LOADED GUN

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Nov 17, 2011.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    He was a weapon of tongue
    shoots off like a loaded gun
    full of sin against his friends
    no one safe not even kin

    bash and deem inside a greed
    while his destruction makes love bleed
    still the fire of tongue lies he feed
    never hope nor goodness in deed

    He was a loaded gun that kills dreams
    you can hear it in hollow sad screams
    the passion of hurt & pain
    should have been is birth name

    There so many today just like him
    inside this world of fracture life
    willingly to cheat , steal , lie and kill
    bring suffering to da peace be still

    So if you every cross the bliss of tongue
    pack up scat and run
    before you shot wit da word gun
    so you don't become his pon

    :eeek:
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    there are many out there...cutting with daggers formed by words...making sure their lies are heard by all. yet, when they're called on it, they got excuses for what was said. always excuses for what they say. there's never a moment of peace around them. always something going on in their drama infested lives.

    nice flow, $$RICHMAN$$
     
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    Sometimes
    We
    Excuse and accuse
    Forgive and not forgive
    Lie or lye the soul down
    Follow our Fellow teacher
    Depends on the Depeening Dependance will have with Ourselves down deep inside!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Fo real , I've met far too many and heard it all and often none can back it up
    but they make it so real people get fooled by da tongue of destruction !

    I think we should slow down think and becareful of what comes out
    a lie is easy but hard to bring truth because it follows with another lie
    the tongue is a sword of death if not used right......

    Thankz fam....