Black Poetry : "l'm at a lost for words"

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  1. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    listen to me...

    l have words to say that..
    only making love to you can clearly convey

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    crescent
    phases of your soul and mind
    man-i-fested
    orbiting my keen eye and observation...
    why and where and when to touch you
    and especially... how
    let me show you... now
    writing my vow down your spine
    with the permanent ink of
    my tongue
    simultaneously you go up as l go
    down...

    down...

    down...
    oil baths
    baptizing you in the name of climax
    culmination and cosmos
    as l navigate your secret wet paths
    with unravelling calculation
    teaching maths like eternity...
    you + me
    in the spirit of my infinite love
    that stretches from here to there..
    ear to ear...
    sphere to sphere for you

    l have words to say that...
    only making love to you can clearly convey
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was ummm spicy likes the flow my brother..
    i see your pen flaming....tight hot drop!!!!!
     
  3. DA BROTHER LOVE

    DA BROTHER LOVE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and this one was a challenge, had to pull out the dictionary and chit.... good read for the elevation of the mind
     
  4. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    j'hiah

    This was Dope! :coffee:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was str8 off da hook in fine tune brutha
     
  6. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx Mz...

    DA BROTHER LOVE...
    l bow to that name don :bowdown:
    :lol: thanx

    $R,
    u know the deal...
    escort of love strikes back!!
    peace

    caramelpython,
    :coffee: ...
    :thanks:


    :coffee:
     
  7. angelicsage

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    No...I think I'm the one that's at a loss for words... :sand:

    Consider me silenced and breathtaken with Astonishment...

    Maad Love...
    Your poetic reflection
    Sage

    ps...there is another classic col-loveration waiting for us
    to sign our names to it...:D just a lil reminder
    since I see your poetic vibe is starting to peek...
    the moment must be siezed... :wink:
     
  8. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    a beautiful poem.
    filled with wonderful imagery
    word play, rhythm and heat..a sensual delight..
     
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    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I smiled through this whole piece
    but the line above made me nod my head...yes, yes, yes...
    this joint had the hotness...:hot: :hot: :hot:
    :flame: :flame: :flame:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This scribe had a fluid movement to it that made those sensual descriptions flow all the more. Flow on ahead poet.
     
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