Black Poetry : Living In Silence

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by one_love, Oct 28, 2002.

  1. one_love

    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I just don't know anymore
    I'm trying so much
    But my brain is sore
    Pain delivered by my touch
    Eyes red from crying
    Bleeding inside, I'm dying
    So many secrets unknown
    I just need to think alone
    My emotions are all bottled up
    You can stay strong
    Except I can't, I'm wrong
    I'm losing the battle inside
    What can I do? I tried
    I have flashbacks in my dreams
    Living my life in silent screams
    One day I'll talk out loud
    When my Faith, Hope, and Heart are found
    Until then my lips move
    But there won't be any sound.

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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lean on me
    as i give u sound
    da light of bright
    sight one see
    da open mind
    so da tears not flow
    but da smile to sho
    sharing ya inner feels
    upon da rest
    sweetie dis was da best of test
    in tyme da blessing comes
    truely ur da one.
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    been there hun...
     
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    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks

    Thanks for the replys. It has been a while

    One_Love
     
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    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    its okay to be here...

    One Love...

    I've felt and experienced every line you've written...Living in silence is the worst of them alone...the solitary blue, the isolation, the confusion...I can tell u bro, poetry is therapeutic singing is healing..praying is calming...do it your way in your time..but for yourself, do it bro....I'm here to talk if u wanna call South Africa hahahaha....:)
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whew

    One this took me there...

    Reas
     
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    one_love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks guys. I'm a girl by the way mkhaya lo'. Thanks for the reply and understanding.
    Thanks Reason.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed thank u 4 sharing lo'
     
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    "eyes red from crying"

    and the morning after i look like a frog..

    been there was there....with other words i feld this one

    one love ...ONE LOVE!
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you're at the door of self-discovery now queen...

    know dat

    :thanks: nfinite......
     
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