Black Poetry : Living In A Mixed Up World~A So'ja,Coco&EpipFusion

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  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    livinginadeximpudlrow

    putting more value on pets then human beings
    the hungry starve, while cities monopolize
    bulldozed houses could have sheltered the homeless.....
    but hey! Who could care less?
    homeless ain't a good investment


    livinginadeximpudlrow

    gunfire the new children's bedtime lullaby
    drive by neighborhood's latest pasttime.
    no one seems to die from natural causes
    it's always because of ....



    livinginadeximpudlrow

    daddys misguided pride for the bling bling
    not giving a **** about his offspring
    mama's crack habit forsakes maternal instincts
    neglected babies evolved into chaotic mentalities
    directing their anger onto society


    livinginadeximpudlrow

    Living in a mixed up world inside the blender
    We’ve been the subject of scorn for as long as I can remember
    And when you get out of line you’d better watch your temper
    Cause they have spray which spew mace or pepper


    livinginadeximpudlrow

    We are not concerned about you - just what you have
    I don’t mean baseball cards - I mean the cash
    Living life in the lane that’s fast
    Then you wonder why stuff is messed up -
    Some questions don’t need to be asked


    livinginadeximpudlrow

    Spending billions on the defense fund
    bigger bombs, bigger guns...the menace to society
    is the way this country is run
    vomiting patriotism from a rotten core
    never realizing justice starts at your own front door


    livinginadeximpudlrow

    Governmental propaganda & powers that be
    nurturing irresponsibility & false nursery rhymes
    its a mixed up generation that salutes death
    the idolatry of money, the apathy of regret
    this world is in turmoil, without moral value
    perhaps we will come together before the final hour




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    ecaep:heart:peace
     
  2. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    YEAH!!!!!!! WONDERFUL COLLABORATION!!!! I NEED MORE!!!
     
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    Awwww ****!!!!

    This is off the hizay!!!!!!!!!!

    Great collaborative work and very, very clever!!!!

    Thoroughly enjoyed!!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    TRUTH over flowing from this piece...

    loving this portrait.

    continue the flow.
     
  5. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Bishop~GQ & Baller

    Glad you enjoyed the read. Appreciate the bruthaly love.

    It's always cool flowin wit So'ja & my Big Sis.
    Madd love to em :love:


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    really enjoyed this
    COLLABORATION
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis be on da real and the street hood deal
    and i'm feelin dis one to the top of my dome
    so many left home alone as some roam
    collab me again pleaseeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo i don't know what to say...
    there's no endin' to this one...

    great job!!!!!!

    nfinite b/c of time
     
  9. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ya'll betta go head on witcha hi-tech *****!!! This was a feast for the eyes and the mind!!!!

    Thank you soooo much!

    (do dat thang again!)

    a
     
  10. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    thanks to EPI
    Coco - great art work

    thanks to Bishop,GQ,BALLER,UL820,RICH,J'Hiah,Alyce

    dssNY
     
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