Black Poetry : LiveLines

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Antar, Feb 9, 2004.

  1. Antar

    Antar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the granites real as steel
    the trees recede the landfill
    cliffs replay displays
    a(s)ced rays like anvils

    neon twine twisted at twilights
    scenes sprayed with ice
    at midnight
    stars twinklin closa
    with the inklin
    the bricks shine it's candy
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    expand it concious
    replyin to underlined concepts
    bump rumps like chumps
    in rompas
    stray on heavy lands like a honchas
    native tech for dialect
    ripped on the trek
    displays a deepa
    abyss
    intense no need to resist
    deeper intentions
    slow retention
    no speed to need sensation
    replay-rhtyhm lok ta elavastation
    devastion
    in this equation
    i'm persuasive abrasion
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mic check on this
    1-2 , 1-2
    feeling all your intention
    in your flow expansion
    nice one here:)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice drop here i was all into it
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice drop indeed
     
  5. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Drop it as you feel it, keep the flow going.