Black Poetry : "Live" The Revolution With No Commercial Breaks

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blakverb, Jun 21, 2001.

  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The Revolution minus Prince but led by
    Blak kings and Street So'jas will be shown
    LIVE on Cable, Network news, Satellite
    dish and via internet....So at the sound of
    the Bang! hit your download buttons.......
    and view the Revolution at 56k or DSL line
    through a 12,000 dpi resolution to see
    the only solution to our plight / REVOLUTION
    may burn out your monitors so ya
    *** may as well join in / if you try and tell
    Mr. Man the plan we'll treat you like
    Harriet did slaves scared of Freedom
    ...two to the dome...the weak will die during
    REVOLUTION...and it will be shown on
    NBC that the price of freedom is your life
    ....blak or white....with no 30 second interruptions
    of women saying "don't hate me cause I'm beautiful"
    or a bunny beating his drum cause he's still going
    ....or a talking Tiger saying "He's Greeeeeat" /
    the REVOLUTION will be shown LIVE with no
    commercial breaks....white hoods will be
    incinerated with red, white, and blue flags
    and crosses will be shined instead of burned
    GOD wants us free....and by any means necessary...
    it will be....HBO will cancel all boxing events and Don king's
    hair will be Braided...The Buckwheat imitations will
    be outlawed and those falsely imprisoned "amerikka
    anointed" outlaws will be freed, come on home Mumia
    the REVOLUTION will air with no commercial breaks and
    Ted Koppel and Maurie Povich will be put on reservations
    for asking dumb *** questions on why we revolt / and Native Americans will be freed from reservations placed there
    because of unnatural selection of hateful europeans
    and leonard peltier will fly the coop...go on home leonard,
    the streets will be painted in blood the air will be filled with
    love martyrs will be born and cowards will perish....
    this REVOLUTION will be televised with no commercial breaks
    of OJ jumping over suitcases in the airport but he will be
    running from the REVOLUTION the revolution is "negro proof"
    to covert spies that wear our melanin as a disguise and run
    back to Charlie with the blueprint...Hertz will not pick his ***
    up while running from the REVOLUTION...Jerry Springer
    will air live from the streets to show the world "real"
    drama and not some packaged up, ignorant taught souls
    sold and bought...action and I figure Batman will be
    cancelled for the live reports from the streets /and Holy Caped crusader! the commercials will not air there ain't no money
    in REVOLUTION-there ain't no money in truth-the payment
    is freedom of the mind and soul-and most television lacks both
    -so advertisers ain't feelin' it ain't no money in REVOLUTION
    but advertisers will purchase the Ill-morals of certain rap stars
    and Tide will be sold over a massuh p track poisoning
    some minds with further bling bling anti-progression songs
    /the label reads if ingested induce vomiting/ the REVOLUTION
    siphon minds through earholes and implant third eyes
    of those that want to compose the frontline.........the REVOLUTION will not have commercial breaks so DON"T
    MOVE AN INCH....(even s.h.y.t ing is banned)

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Blakverb, Blakverb, Blakverb

    this is some of your BEST stuff, man
    you are so focused
    and you don't stray from the point you are trying to make

    and my mouth is STILL hanging open after reading this piece

    and Blakverb sometimes words can't express a person TRUE greatness

    Peace

    voice muffled
    feathers ruffled
    inside the struggle

    Da Street So'ja
     
  3. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey peeps. N2 wrote a piece about the one and only Gil Scott Heron. I found this old joynt that one of his pieces inspired me to write. I hope ya'll enjoy.

    blak
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak

    This it tyte (pardon my early morning pun) :lol: But you're right.... there ain't no money in Revolution!!


    N2
     
  5. epiphany

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    Verb.....

    All I can say is......Wow!


    Epiphany :heart:
     
  6. hi-wa

    hi-wa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    brotha

    u got something more than talent......
    i feel ya words and am down to revolt
    thanx for x-pressin

    hw
     
  7. AACOOLDRE

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    God **** Man you just droped the bomb. Gill Scott Heron was just overshadowed. You can read two of his poems in the short story section of "WaterGate Part 2". Now we are into some poerty.Everybody needs to see this poem.
     
  8. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Shaking my head in affirmation, jumping up and down, and applauding where ya always seem to take me in scribe poet!!!!

    As you would comment on masterpieces:

    "10"

    :peace:/respect
    GQ
     
  9. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2 - sistuh girl thanks for the comps and writing the piece thatr led me to rediscovering this.

    epiphany - thanks ya queen

    hi-wa - "...more than talent" thanks. I just use what God gives me.

    AACOOLDRE - Thank you brother. I will definitely go check out the short story section.

    To the four of you...ain't nothing but love emanating from the blakman they call "Verb"

    peace
    blak
     
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