Black Poetry : ..................Live the Poetry

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Oct 22, 2004.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    what made you write it? i wanna piece of whatever you had before writing this. it was so DEEP! have you ever listened to Lauryn Hill's MTV Unplugged 2.0? you don't sound like her, you sound like you, but ya'll both have that kinda thing going like a verse, a song, a life story, a treasure, a problem, a soul-soul found solution all in words, words that are more than words, sistah this was a chart topper, you had me all up in this one, can i get another helpin'? or a part two? if not, i ain't trippin' because this one by itself is a work of art............................"sweetest thing i've ever known.........." :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone: :welldone:
     
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    wonderful drop sis
    so many angels in the release
    much love
    flow onward
    feeling the poetic release deep

    Blue:heart:
     
  4. realeyezrealize

    realeyezrealize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW :dance3:

    word play you got it
    I'm hypnotized in that wave frequency you possess
    yet not a game but it's real
    a virture seen
    easily revealed
    yet profound in it's measure
    You have all together diasected the essence of
    laying it out
    your words scream loudly the theme of your theory :hearthis:
    this peace
    in this peice that now has me thinking
    so
    Sow on
    the stage is set, I know the harvest will be plenty
    empty that 40 and let the ink run out
    until you reach
    However I prophetically speak
    that spice in your writing highly favoured won't ever dry out
    Let the words ring cause they sing and many can share
    Sage has spoken
    and the vibe leaves me here
    now
    thinking? :pc:
    :kiss1:
    p.s
    I agree with lilcherry
    defiently a Lauryn Hill vibe
    you release pure , true creative beauty
    It's all you
    (a intentional Lauryn Hill fan)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 tyte drop this flow pose a ring sweet ...
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    you held me sista sage
    couldn't get away
    from your word play
    thinking..about
    thinking
    like a haiku i just drew
    "mind like an eddy deepened"
    took that essence round
    and round
    thinking..
    about freeing
    the soul
    you held me sista
    playing with your thinking
    while thinking..
    nice...very nice
     
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    I am loving this piece! This was a very deep and creative piece that comes from a gift not a talent. Keep your flow on!
     
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    THA HOOKUPMAN Banned MEMBER

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    essence is all yours

    baby!!!!!!!........your flowing free now ...i see your poetic being now..no walls or windows...just free thought....no styles no more just flow....great work baby!!!....hookup :flamet: :flamet: :flamet:
     
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    this is definately some FREE prose at it's finest....
    i got caught up in da words and was truely enamored by
    the display of skill...to be a poet who is truely free
    we must write what we live and live what we write....to a certain degree of course :wink:

    lovely....

    one love
    khasm
     
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    no margins....lovin it
     
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