Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Oct 22, 2004.
All rights reserved
what made you write it? i wanna piece of whatever you had before writing this. it was so DEEP! have you ever listened to Lauryn Hill's MTV Unplugged 2.0? you don't sound like her, you sound like you, but ya'll both have that kinda thing going like a verse, a song, a life story, a treasure, a problem, a soul-soul found solution all in words, words that are more than words, sistah this was a chart topper, you had me all up in this one, can i get another helpin'? or a part two? if not, i ain't trippin' because this one by itself is a work of art............................"sweetest thing i've ever known.........."
wonderful drop sis
so many angels in the release
feeling the poetic release deep
word play you got it
I'm hypnotized in that wave frequency you possess
yet not a game but it's real
a virture seen
yet profound in it's measure
You have all together diasected the essence of
laying it out
your words scream loudly the theme of your theory
in this peice that now has me thinking
the stage is set, I know the harvest will be plenty
empty that 40 and let the ink run out
until you reach
However I prophetically speak
that spice in your writing highly favoured won't ever dry out
Let the words ring cause they sing and many can share
Sage has spoken
and the vibe leaves me here
I agree with lilcherry
defiently a Lauryn Hill vibe
you release pure , true creative beauty
It's all you
(a intentional Lauryn Hill fan)
str8 tyte drop this flow pose a ring sweet ...
you held me sista sage
couldn't get away
from your word play
like a haiku i just drew
"mind like an eddy deepened"
took that essence round
you held me sista
playing with your thinking
I am loving this piece! This was a very deep and creative piece that comes from a gift not a talent. Keep your flow on!
essence is all yours
baby!!!!!!!........your flowing free now ...i see your poetic being now..no walls or windows...just free thought....no styles no more just flow....great work baby!!!....hookup :flamet: :flamet: :flamet:
this is definately some FREE prose at it's finest....
i got caught up in da words and was truely enamored by
the display of skill...to be a poet who is truely free
we must write what we live and live what we write....to a certain degree of course
no margins....lovin it
Separate names with a comma.