Quiet Poetry Lounge : Live LIfe To The Fullest

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Dlovely, Dec 21, 2005.

  1. Dlovely

    Dlovely Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Why do so many innocent people die
    when i think about it, it makes me cry

    some from suicide, some get killed
    just to make other peoples dreams fufilled

    how come everyone cant put their problems aside
    how come most people got to hide

    enjoy life while you can
    expecially if your life had just began

    forget all worries have no fear
    put on a smile without a tear

    make some friends, find a lover
    enjoy your life for there wont be any other

    come out of your hole and breath the fresh air
    because in a couple of years it might not be there
     
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    Aye...this was off the hook was brother $$RICH$$ would say
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Str8 mad tyte love da flow
     
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    Dlovely Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thkn peeps
     
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    this was very moving flow on girl!!!!!!!!!:star: :nuts:
     
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    Tomorrow is not promised to anyone, you've got that right poet. This was on point.
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yet, this is the world we live in, "Here today...gone tomorrow. Live every moment, as if it's your last...for one moment will be.
    Wonderful piece poet, thanks for dropping
     
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