Khasm13 : live from monster island...

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    on a tiny island
    located in the lost seas
    lives a monster
    taller than great oak trees
    men and women look like
    fleas
    up against
    this
    monster
    coming here you need a bodyguard
    like kevin kostner
    cause this aint no water world
    a 7 headed dragon munches on whales
    like hillbillys munch on squirels
    behold the pale horse
    when this monster sets its course
    an unstopable force
    that was banished on this isle
    waiting for the day that mans guile
    will release the dragons inner beast
    so that upon the world
    he can ravage and feast
    on feeble men
    with a grin
    who have forgotten
    it was them
    that put him here in the first place
    ancient africans and their knowledge
    gave chase
    and banished this beast to his home base
    that is now called monster isle
    but todays man is buck wild
    and actually looking for the dragon
    to use as a weapon of mass destruction
    but the 7 heads only want the worlds abduction
    and to blast enemies with fire tagging
    but this unknown to these men
    and that there is no controlling this dragon
    who breathes fire hotter then the sun
    him is sour from his exile
    and wants to burn everyone
    mans lust for power
    empowers this demon
    and soon will come the day when he is released
    from monster isle
    and the world will feel the fire from the beast
    maybe the time is now
     
  2. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    All I got to say is....
    Tell it like it is!!!
    The way you told this story was magnificent!!!
    Sho nuff
    The game of
    survival of the fittest cannot
    be played by the miniscule.

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Khasm13 this deep..i hear your warning...nice flow
    Peace:heart:
     
  4. Khasm13

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    coming thru like king ghidrah
    or rodan
    destruction of the earth
    is da masta plan

    thanks play--so tru..survival of da fittest
    thanks blue--warning warning...danger will robinson...lol
    peace
    khasm
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This story seems like a video game where your blasting monsters n studfff, but it had a level of deepness to it....Tyte flow Khas:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very awesome scribe i feel dis one way down deep
    dis like a space jammmmmmmmmmm!!!!
    tyte scribe bruh !
     
  7. Khasm13

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    swtt--check this out
    "And I stood upon the sand of the sea, and saw a beast rise up out of the sea, having seven heads and ten horns, and upon his horns ten crowns, and upon his heads the name of blasphemy." Revelation 13:1]
    peace
    khasm
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "mans lust for power
    empowers this demon
    and soon will come the day when he is released" -Khasm13

    You speak of madness- with mad skills!
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Immediately, when I began reading this I knew what u were talking about...but ur writing is so clever, skillful and brilliant...Your skillz simply amaze me. The perspective u pose was like whoa!

    If your not already...u should be published! You talent is just phenomenal.
     
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    rich---thanks brah, what you add to this site is truely amazing :)

    1poet---how did you know that i've been striken with madness?
    lol...thanks brah

    angeli...i'm glad you knew what i was talking about...sometimes i try to hide meanings so they can mess with the subconcious...thank you so much for your kind words
    peace
    khasm
     
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