Black Poetry : Little Girl

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ~Provakativ~, Jan 28, 2004.

  1. ~Provakativ~

    ~Provakativ~ Active Member MEMBER

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    Little girl....
    Take your *** home
    You out in the world as an infant and you're grown
    Little girl you're really starting to piss me off
    can you tell

    Go back to those days where you play with your dolls and got excited about the fair

    **** it little girl why do you think you're grown
    You say you're grown but yet you ran away from home?

    Help me understand little girl
    Help me to see

    I don't care if you cuss me out for being in your business...I'd rather have that than me cussing out me because you're dead

    Don't you get it little girl
    Why let men ravage your insides
    For a $5 special or twenty on a good night?

    Watch yourself before you can't even see
    And your body is ravaged with HIV

    **** it little girl why do you hide
    Behind that makeup and that fake *** hair
    But you're responsible because of that dirty *** money you make
    You say you have problems, maybe 99
    But you're sixteen years old and you still got all this time..
    All this time...to be grown

    You are sooooooo beautiful little girl is that what you don't see
    You can't let others mess you up inside or let other's people's situations set you up
    As an excuse

    How you let muthufuckas you don't even know run up in your thighs
    Deposit their nastiness and run away into the night

    Little Girl Little girl...blind by the world that for you it sees
    I don't understand...care to elaborate for me

    You dropped out of high school
    You stayed away from home
    But yet you want some attention and you want me to gone on

    But I see what you don't and you can't see what I do
    We may be two seperate people but I'll be damned girl if I don't love you

    Little Girl Little Girl....
    Don't get lost in the night

    Take your *** home, it's not to late to go to the light
    I may not be your favorite person and you think I'm only like a fever blister...

    But I'm coming at you like this because little one, precious one...
    You're my little sister.
    :cry: :censored: :argue:
     
  2. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It is sad the path that many of our young sistas have chosen...speak on
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice flow i was feeling u here
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Selling their innocence and lives away, I'm hearing you in this scribe that makes you shake your head. You penned this so well.
     
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    moham Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hello there Provokativ,

    little girls need their parents (and environment) to be there for them to love them, to guide them, set boundaries for them, stimulate their talents and so much more, in order for them to grow (mentally, spiritually).

    This was a nice piece.

    greets.moham
     
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    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dang, this piece was so tyte.....it was madd deep......I like yo style.....this poem was wild......much love for this.....the message was well heard.

    foxy........
     
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    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very very tight...and so heart wrenching. much love to you.
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a strong piece
    with a strong message
    "tough love"...is often
    what it takes to have
    your message heard

    this was conscious...
     
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