Black Poetry : little cindy (ghetto casualty)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by patrice, Apr 9, 2002.

  1. patrice

    patrice Active Member MEMBER

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    little cindy
    brown skin, thick lips, bright eyes, hair's kinky
    she's really pretty
    shakes her shimmy
    to cop the cash
    you step to her incorrectly, she's quick to blast
    hard knocks not a stranger, she puffs the hash
    to maintain in this game, you see her past
    it's kinda sordid, rather morbid
    she lost her dad, when she was twelve
    he got sent up river and caught a shank in his liver
    so how you figure
    this story goes
    a ghetto child, buck wild, heart ice cold
    from bone marrow to the very essence of her soul
    she hates existence, had to put her dreams on hold
    the consequences of the choices made by family
    makes little cindy want to shorten life expectancy
    no longer sacred, desecrated, ghetto tragedy
    her womb abused by unwanted sexuality

    "hey daddy,
    i'll pop the coochie if the loochie is right
    my lap dance will wet your pants
    i'll take you home tonight
    and give you head until your **** feels dead from numbness, that's tight?
    the going rate is a buck fifty, think you can handle that price?"

    little cindy.
    brown skin, thick lips, bright eyes, hair's kinky, she's really pretty.
    found in project dumpster, throat slitted.
    another heartless murder that society has committed
    but won't admit it.

    heart ic
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Queen,

    Too deep - too real!!!

    Dug ya flow!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  3. brotherman

    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like that -especially after having the priviledge to hear you spit it. Powerful ending to acknowledge we (society) won't admit our participation in the passivity of conciousness while we fall one by one, all becoming casualties.
     
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    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    whoa this was on point :toast:
     
  5. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I second that!!

    Definitly on Point!!
     
  6. Derrick Jay

    Derrick Jay Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mmph!!! well let the story be told, body cold from despair and not a care to share her blues...a story not seen on the evening news.

    this is too tight to mention...

    One,
    Derrick Jay
     
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