Quiet Poetry Lounge : Little Black Beautiful Girl

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    She was sweet
    beautiful & unique
    mid dark chocolate
    cascading beneath
    deep soul of Gold
    heart of purple passion
    a vision of tomorrow
    a desire to rise
    she was a radiant of
    smiles past unfortunate
    years and da cry of tears
    a child of proerty eyez
    a cherokee mind yet
    on the wrong side of da
    train as her pain stain
    life's measure of pleasure

    Little black girl of beauty
    thought abundantly from
    da depth of the soul wit
    burning talent as speaker
    i realize this child worth
    and was no curse or any
    worse then i from temptation
    reunionize mentally wit a
    greater passion tenacity
    to strive , reach and be held
    da morning prayer whispers
    heard and defined in child
    little lad with flicked face
    age past yesterday stay

    she was charmed once
    and love'd lastly but was
    a gift from above's heavens
    place'd upon earth wickedness
    finding way to pathways of
    hope and grace straightway to
    unconditional love of "GOD"
    she was a pearl this girl of
    blackness of beauty was
    i knew the twisted road would
    dem fate yet believed tomorrow
    i too weep in the salty tears for
    return . :crying:
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was such a warm, touching flow. I felt the entire flow of it...beautiful piece poet
     
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    Little beautiful Black girl sounds like a precious flower, one who might have blossomed amid weeds, one whose petals need to be handed delicately, lest they be bruised beyond repair. Such a tender, compassionate scribe brotha.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank you queentswana , i was watching the little kids play
    and one little girl stood out in my mind .

    Thankz watz your so right and right now i see it handled wrongly
    if i only had answers to mend .
     
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    This was beautiful Most little black girls are precious and that in turn becomes beautiful black women. Or as you like to call it Queens.......
     
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    true dat thankz you and this why i try to see these black beauties
    become the beautiful Queenz they are to be .
     
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    well spoken it fell on open ears.
     
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    let it be heard that Queenz are why we here today
    this black little girl will rise and be as strong , wise
    and fill in goodness from the window i watch gracefully
     
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