Quiet Poetry Lounge : Little Back Girl

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cuvriefloesta, Dec 20, 2003.

  1. cuvriefloesta

    cuvriefloesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am the forgotten one
    The long ignored and down trotten one
    The one behind the slide
    watching as the light skin one slides down...

    slide down little light skin girl
    I hope you land on rocks
    cause i hate your little long pony tails
    and those ruffles in your socks

    I don't know why i feel this way
    but i know i do
    cause i'm watching that BET video
    and all i see is you

    where am i
    am in that video
    hiding behind the slide
    naw i'm there but the camera doesn't show my face
    it only zooms in from behind

    i have no one to look up to
    so i must look down on you
    because i am the forgotten one
    behind the slide
    watching you
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow
    i likes
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    nice drop felt it
     
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    wow...release it in the flow...feeling you on this scribe
    Peace
     
  5. cuvriefloesta

    cuvriefloesta Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Again!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    most welcome keep lovin and giving as love is given unto u
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    enjoyed the read again
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Sometimes we are the "forgotten ones" ...but only we can fix that, come to the front line and shine where you would and should be. Light has a awesome shine...behind "black"
     
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    Shaking my head at the images placed before us to make us feel that we are less. When actually we are beautiful no matter what shade of blackness. You brought this all the way home.
     
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    Oh lord, this is so right on! It pains me, but it's real. You dropped this majestically.
     
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