Black Poetry : Literary Lovers

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by N2urSoul, Apr 5, 2001.

  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    In a quiet public library
    sits an educated man
    thinking of his future
    with a special woman-
    afraid of who she is
    he ponders; wondering
    just what are her plans

    Directly across the room from him
    an accomplished, well written
    woman stands
    remembering her tomorrows
    considering him to be hers,
    wanting him to be her man-
    she's taking notes, writing
    a requisition-
    because she wants to know
    ...is he the one who could
    scribe her
    prose her
    write a novel about "A Life Together"
    like a composition to recite forever
    not allowing dust to overtake
    the title on the cover of their
    .....Literary Love ~

    This man and woman in the same library,
    at the same time,
    are separated
    by hardcovers
    magazine racks
    bookshelves and
    paperbacks-
    yet they exist.... and think similar thoughts

    The two finally meet and
    read each other
    for hours and hours; for days on end
    becoming more knowledgeable of the
    other -
    infinite possibilities-

    doing research to become more familiar-
    they gain insight upon interest
    losing themselves only to learning
    comprehending asking questions
    inquisitive discovery uncovered
    there's more to him - there's more to her...
    past life experiences to future aspirations;
    admiration with inclinations to relationships
    with varying degrees of complication

    After the probing session was over
    they decided to join souls and collaborate
    it was the best of the best... and
    the crem' de la creme...
    ...like...
    Reading and Writing;
    Speaking and Spelling;
    Listening and Learning

    this man and this woman
    who at one time
    knew not each other
    were no longer separated
    by books in the library -
    no longer separated by space
    nor by time
    they, You, I, we became the published material
    that made "US" more literal.

    Literally YOURS,
    Literally MINE
    ...................Literary Lovers...............
     
  2. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****!!! Literally...lol

    Your flow is simply remarkable and has sent my mind spinning...

    Literary lovers... how bout we write a book about how we would live together, love together, be together, breathe together and live our lives to da page.

    lets write our own future and erase our pasts so we begin from just us and build from there...

    your concept was lovely! very inspiring N2!!!

    Diggin ya style
    Reas
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whewwww...N2...N2...N2...

    What ya do with ya literary skillz sends me there!!!!

    I am in :heart: with your words!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ~

    <<whiping the sweat from my brow>>

    GQ - ya' know "I put in work" just
    to make you happy!!

    Ya' know I luv your scribes like that
    too....thank you for blessin' my page
    with your "Star-of-Bethlehem" rays!!

    Who luvs ya' daddy!!??
    ME......ME......ME -do!
    Thank you GQ, thank you....
     
  5. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    REASON~

    There is a "REASON for everything - isn't there?!

    I'm so happy you
    enjoyed reading this;
    It's good to know there
    is so much love in this
    lounge -
    I'll keep sharing
    if you promise
    to keep reading
    ME!!

    Thanks for your thoughtful/thought-filled
    words of encouragement...
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    N2

    Lately I been in a time crunch so I neva have time to hit em all but know that I do read you! You are an incredible artist...

    I'm checkin fa you!
    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Reas~

    May I call you that?!

    All I can say is...
    If you like it, then I love it!!

    Again, much thanks flows
    from me to you.

    N2
     
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    Street So'ja Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ain't nothing like

    somebody who can masturbate you
    mentally and
    physically

    good work kid
     
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    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    (I see) now you're starting to master the art of storytelling. Uh oh watch out world.

    one love,blak
     
  10. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So'ja

    Thank you for the comps -
    one thing that I would like
    to comment on--
    you said, "good work kid"
    in your reply...I'm sure
    you meant no harm. I do
    appreciate your reply, but I would
    like you to know that I am
    a grown woman, and would
    request to be considered as
    such.

    Thank you again!
     
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