Black Poetry : Literally!!!!! (*dedicted to the back stabbers*)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by krazelyricks, Dec 5, 2004.

  1. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My name is foxi
    Well, at least that's what they call me
    I act a little ghettoly
    But that is just me
    Don't flip and twist me
    If you ain't ready to step to me
    Don't talk behind my back, if you ain't feeling me
    Take this rhyme to stride
    Talkin' won't hurt my pride
    But if you gon' talk, please have enough decency to say it eye to eye
    I ain't got time for the lies
    Becuz to be frank with you, I could give a [email protected] about why the cage bird sings
    If you ain't ready to jump in the fighting ring
    If you ain't woman or man enough to let you fist up like your lips fly
    Don't step to this chick, just keep my name out your mouth
    Becuz I've tried too hard become a butterfly to become moth
    Watch your mouth
    And much worst, watch who you talk about b4 my feet hit you where the good lawd split you down south
    Rhyming ain't new to me
    It just come naturally
    I'm just letting you know if you try to dis me
    Or talk about me
    That my rhymes will become reality
    Not figuratively
    But LITERALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I feel you... krazy like a fox!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwwwwwwwww!
    down side , banggin vibe
    da scribe ride da wave
    of blaze ....literally
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Those back stabbers are out there foxi. Some learn their lesson when they are young, others grow old still doing the same old foolishness. Most folks are too chicken to step up and say what they have to say, that's why they're called cowards. Even when you vent, it still comes out as poetry. I hear ya, flow on.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You brought this girl, and then some!! :hearthis:

    Girl, you sure you're a teen? :D You write like someone much older.
     
  6. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank ya'll so much. Ya'll really know how to flatter a girl. :D Oh, how ya'll make me so speechless. Thank ya'll so much for feeling my flow and sending some much needed encouragement. Much love family.
     
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    MADDRAPPER Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    look this was all right and true bu tlet me add this right here

    Backstabbers are whack grabbers of fame and cause

    A local storm in social form the lame shall pause

    Behavior considered major and bitter like cheddar

    Talk behind backs their line whack blind facts never

    True exaggerate add junk bad punks words never clever
     
  8. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :uzi: Light dem up lil sis I got ya back...
    Tight post here poet!
     
  9. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    word :cool:

    if i wasnt skreet smart


    I might be skurrreed hehehe

    but I iz and I am thoroughly enjoying this one sista
     
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    Leaky103 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    impressive

    I like this one all the backstabbers betta watch out!
     
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