Black Poetry : Listening to Nothing

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Ladysoul, Nov 26, 2002.

  1. Ladysoul

    Ladysoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Speak to me
    Let the sweetness of your voice caress my ear
    Each syllable you whisper
    Echoes as a beat in my heart

    Keep on Speaking
    Because you don’t tell me sweet nothings
    Your rhythm is powerful
    With the purpose to make my soul dance

    Just talk to me
    The jazzy rhythm of your melodic voice
    Soothes my troubled mind
    And gives my body peace

    Keep on talking
    Because your whisper’s like fire
    That engulfs my being
    And Baby it’s getting me hot

    Feed me your voice
    As the vibrations go through my ear
    You send a chill down my spine
    Capturing my mind as a part of your soul

    Baby just tell me something
    Because as I look at you and realize
    I’m so taken by the physical
    And your sound & rhythm that
    I didn’t stop to think about your words
    Now that I’m really listening
    I notice your lips are moving and sweet sound is definitely coming out
    But you're just using big words with no meaning, so you really ain’t said **** yet!

    -Briana
     
  2. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ladysoul..

    you have set the mood with your words...and then flipped it at the end...and I like the point you have to make...nice peace..

    K
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    guess i shut up!!!

    nice flow and the way u flip da script was tyght ..
     
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    Ladysoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you both for taking the time to read my piece
     
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