Black Poetry : Listen

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Nov 28, 2001.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Listen,
    To the air
    Move the gentle breeze

    As the wind
    Brushes against your face
    Smoothing out the desolate
    Shades

    Calm shadows
    With the ripple affect

    And double
    The nauty by nature
    Reality
    As natural as you can

    Can you hear me?

    I mean my mood
    And my eagerness
    Gentleness
    And tone

    Can you feel me?
    My delicate perge
    With vigorous emotion

    No,really can you

    REally know
    How I'm feeling

    If you read between the lines
    You can indicate it clearly

    And listen
    To the way I'm breathing
    And the way my words
    Roll off my tongue
    INto a quiet thunder

    Listen...

    Desert Storm
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i listen...

    i hear.

    as the peacefulness of your thunder wash over me.

    NICE.
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I see.

    Glad to see ya
    Thank you.
    Desert Storm
     
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