Black Poetry : Listen Up!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Alizentang, Jun 23, 2003.

  1. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm tired of you girls making a bad name for me
    Cause I'm a woman of a different breed
    And all ya'll men got yourselves to blame
    Cause I've spent 5 years falling victim to "da game"
    Now I recognize your gameplan before you even wrote it
    You can throw me a line betcha a** I won't bite it
    Now it's time for Alize' to play wit yo emotions
    Memories of me will have you strokin latenight wit lotion

    I've put in too much time to turn back B****
    See I'm ride or die, you just a snitch
    So make way girls, cause I take what I want
    Men jones for my realness, not what I flaunt
    Showin your breats and a** you get no respect
    I show I'm down, ain't sh** I can't get
    So move round girls, step outta my way
    Try to take what's mine and you gonna get played

    Now to those n****s who think they got it locked
    Messin wit me you gonna get popped
    I don't ride wit chicken heads and hoes
    I live by the creed "That's the way the game goes"
    The game you runnin, I've already played
    So step to me, but I'm the one gettin paid
    And to the "boy" who thought he had me
    You still in the ghetto and I'm livin lovely
    I told you a good woman like me would come out on top
    So step if you bad, but you gonna get got!
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    heard dat !!!!
    let it flow as new love seep in
    tyte
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****! this was great girl!
     
  4. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks to $$RICH$$ and Lovely. I lvoe hearing back from the both of you. Two fellow poets that I look up to. My poetry role models. LOL! I'm glad that you are feelin my flows
     
  5. ASHANTA

    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OO--------------------------00----------------------this is the truth, teach thats all I could say, this is excellent with wisdom and knowledge.
     
  6. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks ASHANTA. Your words mean a lot to me.
     
  7. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You, for sharing those very real thoughts!
     
  8. the_story

    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop: :jawdrop:
    dayum,thats DEEP!!!
    show dem n****s how its done gurl!!
    :toast: :toast: :D ;)
     
  9. krazelyricks

    krazelyricks Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yo this flo was deep and eloquent. Tellin them hoes so they know you always on top.
    Love and Peace,
    Foxylady30315
     
  10. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Fam!!
     
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