Black Poetry : Listen & Know

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Mar 27, 2002.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want to live vicariously in
    Casanova-laced dreams
    to speak in the softest
    of reality-filled tones;
    in almost a quaint,
    and gentle nuance that
    personifies me
    as seductively
    as you desire me to be
    when you

    listen
    &
    know

    Yet, you will know what
    I'm saying; hearing me
    clearly and understanding
    with deep appreciation
    of these precious moments
    of consideration I bring to bear
    for a gracious exodus to love

    When I whisper sweetly
    telling you that I'd love
    to capture a piece of a starlit
    night to place in a bottle to offer
    to you as a token of my fondness,
    you will feel the tingle of me all over

    As you listen quietly, I am compelled
    to propose a piece of me to you so
    pure that the measure of your own heart's
    worth is fulfilled; so warm and free to
    love with all that you are

    Yet you have not quite come to know
    the magnitude to which I prosper
    by being so in love with you;
    but my darling, so you shall, this
    I faithfully vow

    Listen as my heart mixes fanciful
    words with devoted actions that
    causes you to experience much,
    if not all of what you've yearned for
    in no ordinary man; but I, your man

    listen
    &
    know

    that love is a
    soothing
    calm and
    an easy notion
    when heard and
    internalized
    within the annals
    of our shared soul's
    connection

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wheeeeeeeew!

    GQ, man this is too Tyte!!
    Very intelligent flow Bruh, I bow down!!
    Keep it Hot!!
    I dig!!
     
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    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    riveting...
    you got me all caught up in verse line and rhythm...
    great flow!
    -7:spinstar
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    man u scribe a masterful flow like dat!
    100% into it dayummm bru....
     
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    brotherman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maaaaan, If I was a guuurrl....

    A ghetto girl perhaps, may not feel you, but a real sister would not take them words likely. Just smooth, dude, smooth.
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GeeQue.


    aight!! ...here i am! i got here as fast as i could!! :D

    you had me dashin' ova here... just to have my breath
    taken away?!! that's messed up!! ...but i understand
    that you just "do what you do"... :wink:

    (this is beautiful work... & dats RT)

    :heart:
    MEB.
     
  7. Euphoria

    Euphoria Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, that's the most beautiful scribe I've read in a long time. Just as brotherman said, well If I was ur gurl.......... lol
    Beautiful piece GQ. The flow, the words.... I just read it a second time and decided that I love the first stanza and:
    When I whisper sweetly
    telling you that I'd love
    to capture a piece of a starlit
    night to place in a bottle to offer
    to you as a token of my fondness,
    you will feel the tingle of me all over

    that phrase the best. Ok that's me for now.
    *Emma*
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    feeling this dun
    the color give it mad flava
     
  9. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****!!!!!!!!!!
    unbeleavable peice
    love reading your work
     
  10. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the read family!!!

    :peace:/:heart:
    GQ
     
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