Quiet Poetry Lounge : Liquid words

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by sweetndnhunny, Jan 25, 2005.

  1. sweetndnhunny

    sweetndnhunny New Member MEMBER

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    I want to be free of these
    Liquid words that flow over me and
    Constantly move around me

    To understand really and fully the
    Implications behind the words that you
    Say to me

    Liquid words
    Full of excuses
    And lies
    Full of time that you never have

    Liquid words
    Melt against my ears
    Assault my heart with
    Truths that they cant cover

    I want to feel the truth and hold onto it.
    Have some solid realism
    To be seen as who I am, NOT
    What you want me to be

    Liquid words
    Impossible to see, to catch
    Full of feeling that you don’t have
    Your eyes holding in them
    An emptiness that I once filled

    I know you, I know you
    But you never knew me
    that is one truth held in those ****
    Liquid words
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome within feelin dis deep void
    from the liquid flow of words one can spread
    sometime we look at it like a window , right through it
    welcome to the family tyte write poet !
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loved the concept of this poet, liquid words, words that are false and hold no weight. Flow on poet, and welcome, looking forward to reading more from you.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm lovin the concept too, and the sentiment comes through loud and clear. Tight write, poet.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    still feeling the liquid pour ...................
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like Hunny, a bunch!
     
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    Prizefighter16 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lovin this scribe...very powerful words, and intense message.

    keep the flow goin
     
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