Black Poetry : Liquid Valentine

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  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cascade over me, liquid Valentine
    Cover me with a love complete
    Rain on me with the warmth of your heart
    Saturate me from my head to my feet

    What kind of concoction are you?
    Part chocolate, caramel, mocha delights
    sweeten my days with your caress
    and let your passion cover my nights

    Fill me with your potion of amour
    Your brew has put me under your spell
    I am hypnotized by your aura
    and by the pure essence that I love so well

    Allow me to coast through your floating garden
    Let me gingerly navigate myself through
    Luscious lilies and ravishing roses adorn the pond
    Their bouquet accentuates this alluring view

    Be mine, liquid Valentine
    Let me whisper sweet nothings to you
    Close your eyes with me as we caress
    and do those things that lovers do
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um

    i need alot of napkins

    after reading this

    lol
     
  3. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A lot of napkins, huh? [email protected] So'ja. Thank you brotha poet.
     
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    Hi sis
    Wow!.
    Very awesome flow.
    I enjoy the richness of this mixture.
    Sticky and steamy..lol..
    Very cool and hot...

    Peace~N~Love
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Glad you're feeling this piece, and [email protected] sis. Thank you Bluewater.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I can do all dat and some u want me to be ya valentine are u sure ya want my liquid valentine love ?
     
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    Allow me to coast through your floating garden
    Let me gingerly navigate myself through
    Luscious lilies and ravishing roses adorn the pond
    Their bouquet accentuates this alluring view



    Watz, I always love the visual imagery you display.
    I can see this read to a lover on a picnic, on a blanket...
    in the park and all the inspiration that comes with a
    beautiful sunny day...

    thanx for sharing...your gift.



    epiphany:heart:
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sensuously rich...

    I really enjoyed reading this! I closed my eyes and could imagine being covered in your image of liquid valentine.

    Beautifully done... I always expect that from you poetess.:)


    feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco:dance:
     
  9. Lataisha Nicole

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    I Can envision your liquid valentine. I see images like sweet, slippery and wet, and I wish I had a Liquid Valentine of my on. That is a sweet write sis
     
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    QQn Rich, that may be a little too much for me to handle, lol. Thank you for bringing this one back poet.
    On a blanket during a picnic would be the perfect place epiphany, thank you for such a kind response poetess, appreciated.
    Glad you could imagine it coco, and let me say, I expect beautiful writes from you as well. Appreciated, poetess.
    Latisha Nicole, thank you, happy you enjoyed those images. I'm just thankful that I have such a good imagination. Great to "see" you in the forum.
     
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