Black Poetry : Liquid Lies (A Free Flow)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Feb 20, 2002.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I've read between the lines
    written in hieroglyphic
    disguise

    Telling tales taller than
    buildings but all fall down
    against liquid lies

    Truth hurts when in hardcore
    form
    Ancient scriptures blindly
    deceptive; no truth to the
    wise

    Flow like you know from
    forked tongue but catch
    no food for thought

    Wicked foretelling
    truth or dare
    Words concealed, cloaked
    sold-out, then bought

    Soaring in the sky
    Lyrical propaganda fanatic
    does fly

    Taking aspirin soothing
    to yet another natural high

    Spoil the honesty within me
    It's an utter catastrophy

    Conform to society
    with runny egg like lies

    When the spirit moves me
    to line between the reads

    Wipe the mouth that is blasphemy
    and surely does bleed

    It's time to speak of
    sincere hope
    without this truth is ********
    dope

    Let integrity
    loose,
    don't perpetrate a fraud
    call a truce

    Word is bond
    that I've
    spent on the real
    with
    token bought deals

    then

    Suggest, manifest, signify
    that it hurts like hell
    Deciding that you can't
    learn to tell

    when the truth is a lie
    merely crystallized…

    ©GQINC2K2
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    lovin' the liquid flows

    pd
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GeeQue.


    i had to let this one sit with me for a while...
    & then i decided that you're on some otha
    kinda ****!! :lol: serious-ly... i can dig it...
    them "liquid lies"...

    :heart:
    MEB.
     
  4. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aww BlakGurl....I just got a dose of you baby!!!! :laugh:

    Thanks for the read ladies!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GeeQue.


    ...hahaha! :lol: a "dose of me"...
    yeah! that would send you to anotha level
    fa sho!

    but you cain't blame me for you bein'
    "special"... (short bus variety) :lol:

    (you know i love you... right??) :D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Q .........bring dem lies of liquid and let to flow all
    ova da place
     
  7. Reason

    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Q!!!

    I really dont have a word for how tight this was! you just sat and came with this huh?

    I'm takin lessons!
    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
  8. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    yo Q you broke all the rules here man
    ****
    this was some strong sh*t man

    feeling it

    100 percent

    dssNY
     
  9. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ~
    U know I'm a fan. This piece is tight. Love the imagery!
     
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