Black Poetry : Liquid Flows: Rain Dancer

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by blackbelle, Jul 15, 2001.

  1. blackbelle

    blackbelle Member MEMBER

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    From here...

    I could hear
    Your naked footprints
    Splashing in puddles
    On the ground

    From here...

    I could feel
    The water
    Trickling down
    The folded paths
    Of your skin

    From here...

    I could see
    The lines of laughter
    Disguised as ageing
    To unseeing eyes

    And I know...

    That the Water Gods
    Must be smiling

    At you...
    Celebrating your
    Naked beginnings

    And
    Dry seasons
    Ending

    Dancing
    Your liquid rhythms

    Out there...

    In the rain


    *Liquid Flows*

    this edition has been blackbelle's vision [aka Hunter]
    All Rights Reserved
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my sista

    this is what it's made of/all about! I love it! Allow me to continue to drink from your anointed pen.

    let the juices flow

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WITHIN

    WATER PATH OF RAIN FLOWER
    SUCH BEAUTY U PAINTS
    AS I WALK INSIDE YA FINGER TOUCH...:heart:
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BB

    Can I have a glass of that "liquid rhythm" too? :D

    You are definitely "on hit" with this flow sistah girl!


    One.
     
  5. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    is that blackbelle?

    it must be.
    graciously giving us the 'liquid'


    tytewurk*****


    sean.
     
  6. Destee

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    Haaaaaaaay BlackBelle :wave:

    it feels so good being drenched in you

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  7. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blackbelle!

    I feel you doing the back stroke in that liquid sea....:D

    T
     
  8. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh i'm dancing in this!
    thank you.
    it's so refreshing for my
    blue day.
    -7:spinstar:
     
  9. blackbelle

    blackbelle Member MEMBER

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    Hey fam...

    thank-you for feeling the raindrops from this liquid flow

    Nothing more beautiful than the thought of a black man dancing naked in the rain

    *water-falls*

    a blackbelle edition
     
  10. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    belle

    and this art work was dancing as well
    eloquent and smooth flow

    loving it


    <DSS>
     
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