Black Poetry : Lips Like Poison

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  1. icandi

    icandi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    His eyes are like windows
    that hold the world i want to get to know
    his words like clouds
    how poeticly he flows
    his lips, his lips are like poison
    Yet I Still... cant get enough
    this man has me in a trans... and i just cant let go

    Speechless when he's around
    so anxious when he speaks
    contagious is what i call him
    cause he makes me weak in his knees
    his lips are like poison
    Yet I Still.... cant get enough
    this man has me in a trans and i just wont let go

    He's the man of my dreams
    and he knows how to treat me right
    understanding, not demanding
    and never tries to put up a figth
    did i mention... His lips are like poison
    Yet I Still... cant get enough
    this man has me in a trans... AND I REFUSE TO LET GO
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wowwwwwwwwwwww!!!!
    dat man
    inside ya heart
    da lips he speak
    make weak
    when thay part
    dis man .....wow

    if i can do all dat i would be wooooweeee!

    lovin da flow ya pen is sweet
     
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    loved da flow do yo thang girl...
     
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    i know what ya mean...its one thing when ya know hes got you locked...its anotha thing when ya dont want to be let go lol...
     
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    Lips like poision but soft like silk
    Every time we kiss your essense I milk
    But your str8 icandi and my tooth is sweet
    Beautiful 2 look at but even sweeter 2 eat

    Lips like poision but soft like silk
    Every time we kiss your essense I milk
    See I'm caramel coated yet smooth and firm
    Str8 python material as you have learned

    Lips like poision but soft like silk
    Every time we kiss your essense I milk
    Cottoncandy sticky
    I love how you fit me
    your personal magic stick like 50.

    Yet my Lips are like poision but soft like silk
    See Every time we kiss your essense I milk!
     
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    i hear ya gurl
    like bbd poizon..
    peace
    khasm.
     
  7. FloeticFire

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    Like posion huh?

    This one was from the heart, created from within vibed all tha way ova here :bowdown:

    Peace Queen
     
  8. icandi

    icandi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the love

    i would like to thank everyone for their support.
     
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    sometimes it be like dis...

    this was a great flow...
    it reminds me of a couple of pieces
    I've written, my addiction and him/absolute

    Girl...I've felt this before and I had to write about it too...

    this was tyte!
     
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    oh my sister
    i feel yall on this
    those lips
    like posion
    just can't let go
    wonderful flow
    Peace
     
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