Black Poetry : Lipped Lock

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by A007, Aug 28, 2003.

  1. A007

    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Words escape me
    perfection has me tongue tied
    if sensuality had a form
    it would take on this shape

    the soft round curves
    formed in the shape of my anticipation
    the sexy smooth grace
    poised to inspire my spirits elevation

    the radiant warmth
    igniting the passion that we share
    the cartharsis of emotion
    breaking down all barriers

    the simply sweet taste
    addressing my hearts true need
    the genuine gentle touch
    that makes you apart of me

    this kiss of your lips
    I long for but can't say so
    because the beauty has me tongue tied
    but I know you feel if from my soul
     
  2. Khasm13

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    right...this is tyte son...
    nice to see you ova here
    keep bless'n us like dis double O
    peace
    khasm
     
  3. LURK

    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tight......definately feelin your delivery on this...real smooth playa....

    one love
     
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    whoaaaaa....brotha is a poet as well...and a prolific one at that :)
    beautiful for real :)
     
  5. true love

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    This was so smooth and sweet. It touched me deeply
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lip lock love of deep essence
    dis was hot !
    flow on
     
  7. MzBlkAngel

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    this was str8
    keep it flowing
     
  8. A007

    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanx everyone....I know its been a while since I've on this forum but I am on my way back....lol

    peace
     
  9. angelicsage

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    WOW!.......this one shot loves arrow straight to my heart...

    this was great!...........I hope you bring us more of this,

    absolutely beautiful.
     
  10. A007

    A007 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    angelic....thank you, thank you, thank you.
     
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