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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Dec 9, 2007.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Your like da foot work to my soul
    compassionate wit love my heart forever holds
    as we dance in da radiant of morrow's love

    In your angel eyes i've captured unknown joy
    as we two step our way to the temple of love
    our journey has been a feast of action

    Inspite of our most vivid impressions
    of our most adorable encounters
    as i reminiscence our single dance
    that was so voluptuous

    Each melody note we dance
    unforgettable under da glist of moonz
    as whispered songz we shared in tunes

    I knoweth now that it was u
    that song the voice that visit me
    as we dance the night away

    shall we continue this dance in da spool of love
     
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    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WE shall dance
    We shall tango
    or Ballet
    Whatever is in our winds
    If it Love we will Dance Ballroom
    If it is lust we will Salsa Merengue
    Showing what we can do
    But to fullfil our heart and
    Leap in to you arm
    You will catch me
    And we will be in Sync
    While we swing


    :dance3: :dance1: :dance3:
     
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    FattnBeautiful Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hmm I feel like dancing now lol. Beautiful and great write.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    ahhh ! yes
    we can tango mango
    and twist away
    dance a love note
    while we play
    it will be of love
    for lust is passion
    yet passionate is real
    for our dance good deal
    leap as i catch
    spin and twist
    dance dance dance
    under da cherry moon
    shall we danceeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!
    PLATINUMLY .

    Thank u so very much Fattn for the beautiful reply & love shown wow !
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    To know there is one who sings for you, and desiring to take her hand and dance to that tune... This felt like a romantic saunter into forever. Such an endearing expression.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well watz u know there is so much i'm trying to say in words
    when i can express myself better eye to eye .......thank u my sweet
     
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