Black Poetry : Lines (A "YOU" Fiend's Short Trip)

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GQ, Apr 22, 2001.

  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baby ya made me go FLATLINE

    Transformed my normal black hue

    Yeah shorty just seein’ ya sexy OUTLINE

    Made me wanna do LINES of YOU

    Perused up and down your HEMLINE

    Soakin’ up all that was within my view

    Specially dug the serious BUSTLINE

    That made me wanna do LINES of YOU

    Walkin’ ta the edge of the night’s SKYLINE

    Floated in your personal zone so true

    Not even realizin’ that faded CHALKLINE

    It was the end of me ODing on YOU
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh snappity- snap snap...

    Flatline's from OD'ing eh?
    You are somethin' else
    blackman....and you know
    I get a good :lol: outta you...
    this is a tyght piece brotha o' mine
    (you might wanna try injections of
    me instead of doing lines...) :kiss:

    :heart: ya' doll!
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ.....

    **** baby!!... is it like dat!?? (lol)

    you hurry up & bring your *** from out
    there in Cali!! :)

    da scribe is definitely tyght tho!

    Peace&Love...
    Sunshyne~
     
  4. Hunter

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    GQ!!

    "LINES AND LYRICS"

    Fa sho!!

    This piece was so dayuum KOOL.

    *story-line* ;)
     
  5. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gq, i heard a soft beat followin' every line of this piece, dear poet. enjoyed it, fo sho...keep on scribin', i'm still watchin'.
     
  6. blakverb

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    GQ,

    don't get too high on her doc...well, why not...sniff one for me :rolling:

    one love,blak
     
  7. Destee

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    GQ this is tyte
    loving these lines

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  8. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ style!!!

    oh how I missed that flow....BANG like a rocket explodes...no doubt you tyght brotha!
    1luv
     
  9. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Damitttt

    thats it we getting hitched this summa man!!!!! LOL

    This was sexxxxxyyyyyyy and well crafted, but you already knew that.


    One
     
  10. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I think I have seen dis girl, I just didn't know what to say!
    But I see you dooo very cool
     
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