Quiet Poetry Lounge : Line

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by JohnDDD, May 16, 2004.

  1. JohnDDD

    JohnDDD Member MEMBER

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    a little buddhist poem for yall, I call it line for it represents infinity and is there while it's only one dimensional.

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    my mind is my refuge
    heaven is the home in which I hide
    no more does my hair belong to winds
    the water that slayed me made me

    my father is the deed from which I suffer
    my mother is the mask of tears I wear
    my life my family,
    my sleeping bore me.
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The things that one can conceive with the mind....even though you speak of suffering and tears, there was an ease in this. Welcome to destee. Hope to read more from you.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice deep mental flow and warmth from this piece
    welcome to destee.com quiet flowz happy u join us
    welcome to the family of love & peace look to read u more
    welcomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome... :wave: JohnDDD

    Thought provoking scribe...
    love your style...
    will look for more work from you!
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome with luv, JohnDDD
    I like the way you came in the door. Sit a spell and spill some more...thanks for sharing this with us.
     
  6. JohnDDD

    JohnDDD Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the compliments about the poem and for giving me so much love...got much love for yall too, peace and do expect more poems from me!
     
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