Quiet Poetry Lounge : Line after Line

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 4EVERLUV, Jun 17, 2006.

  1. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    As I sit hear and read the lines of passion in your heart
    I’m put in a trance, amazed beyond life that
    one person - one man could love so deep and sweet
    creating the heat inside of me, ignite a fire that’s
    Burning for your flame wild and untamed
    And I don’t think I will feel the same as I use to
    Before I read a line written by you
    I sit and mediate and mentally create
    Visions of your thoughts dripping from your pen
    Creating a beautiful master piece
    That makes my heart weak and my soul weep
    I am truly moved by you and what you do
    Mesmerized time after time, line after line
    As you seduce your paper with your pen
    From the start to the end anticipating how the next line will begin
    And maybe I can jump in and feel your flo
    And share the glow that shines within you
    Because line after line
    I’m amazed by you…
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Your words

    I've seen them written
    i've seen them kissin
    line by line in a poetic bliss
    filled with a magical twist

    Your words making love
    touching da heart from above
    as ink leak to page
    leave my mindful vision to glaze
    upon the words i'm amaze

    I never knew one could connect
    understand sweetly in direct
    sharing as a goddess of warmth
    painting pictures soulful to clutch
    as i drift into my slumber
    silent dreams i see as lovers

    Unconditionally thee like no other.

    This was beautifully pose'd i'm sure the one this for is smiling
    awesome write poetess.................................................
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Then you need to smile
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    U can't see my face how lit up it is and the blush from my shyness ...
    Thank you from my heart i really will treasure it thank u again
     
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    Ahhhh $$RICH$$, I didn't mean to make you blush. Please forgive me though if don't believe that you are shy. But I"ll go with that if you say so.
    You are ever so welcome and I only spoke the truth.

    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Trust me those who know me will tell you i'm very shy
    and very mysterious yet lovable ...........................smile
    again Thank u i love it ....
     
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    abstract219 ...standing on the shoulders of giants MEMBER

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    4everluv....this is so beautiful...i shared it with my friend...she loved it....your love poetry is just so awesome....you have a beautiful gift of describing love in its many dimensions....i actually envy you, cause that is my weakest point.....a excellent write...

    RICH.....you are one of the quick-wittest writers i've seen...to come up with so many beautiful responses, to so many pieces is just a amazing skill...

    post after post yall stay consistent and strong on the love pieces...it's a marvel just to watch this all go down.

    ya'll need to take this act on the road...for real....LOL

    amazing.
     
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    Abstract:
    I am truely touched by your words of kindest and inspiration. I mean really. And to think up until a fews weeks ago I had never shared any of my writings with anyone. I write for fun, relaxtion, and to get all of these feelings out when I have no one to share them with. Destee.com was my debut and what a wonderful experiece it is. I had no intentions of participating on the level that I have when I signed up. I just wanted to read everybody elses poetry. It just goes to show you how people can touch you life in such a positive way. I Luv to write about luv because I am in luv with luv.

    I share your sentiments regarding $$RICH$$ I find what he does AMAZING he's the FLO MASTER. :)

    I am very touch by your words, there are so many talented brothas and sistas here. It moved me to read it. Thanks again for your kindest.
    Much Luv
     
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