Quiet Poetry Lounge : Lilacs

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, Mar 10, 2012.

  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Maybe if you remember the words
    To the song
    You won't be so lonely.
    Air full of elements that matter
    Slowly revolving into the sucker
    Of
    Never ending luxuriosness of our connection.
    How could these words spell out
    A Lone Tension when you recite
    That attraction between us.?
    Always wanting to give and forgive
    Melodies just portray the trials you go through for me.
    To see the voice as never having a lone chord left
    To not be taken serious as
    Remembering & Thanking you for your love.
     
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    Simply gorgeous, Sis. Your voice has developed to near perfection. As you would say...Express it!!

    (smile)
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh My Goodness, Your words lighten my heart to the tip! One of our EExpression pieces:) Don't be scard.lol
     
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    Scared, Sis? Naw. You and I have too much passion for life and love to be afraid of anything. And we also have the patience and the wherewithal to wait and work for the outcome we desire.

    About your work, I was just saying to myself last night that I wish you'd post something because I absolutely love the direction your work is taking. I love your work. Please believe. (smile)
     
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    You already know we feed off of oneanother! Fun Thang!
    I'm so glad to have you, TotalView, as a teacher and listener I can connect with! Sho lightens ereythang UP!!
    Love Ya Sis! We {here}
     
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    We {here} :heart:
    Love you too, Sis!

    (smile)
     
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    this is powerful...and I adore the music I heard moving throughout....thank you!
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm so glad You enjoyed all of it! I really enjoy sharing with you, Alyce!:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    standing still listening as this ehco within me .....sweetly scribe.....