Quiet Poetry Lounge : Lil Black LIE

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by GeneticSoul, Dec 6, 2003.

  1. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My Treacherous lie that became this gigantic entity
    Secreting from my heart from every awkward moment of my heart.
    “I love you”
    My lie that was a truth
    Your “I love you” s that were whispered in to my ear ever so softly
    that traveled down through my soul that engulfed my veins that lead to my heart
    in that leaving me rapped up in you.
    In the thought of not having you in my life
    That left me crying every night from that day, you said “I don’t care”, on.
    My Black lie… saying “well, if you don’t then I don’t either”
    I looked around but still I can’t find you there is no you in other guys.
    No similarities
    NO LOVE in others
    Because you are the original… my original lil black lie a lil black lie that became my pain
    My scar
    My wound
    My …
    .... If you could cut me any deeper I’ll have to buy a new heart to keep the scar fresh
    .... If someone would come talk to me. Would I even respond?
    He’s not you so I won’t respond …
    Politely
    Patiently
    Kindly
    No but I will aggressively because he’s my new lie
    My I can’t like you because I don’t want to be hurt again because I still love….
    …..you
     
  2. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oke so Im new to this site but ive read all yalls peices and dang you guys are so freakin good at wat ya do and i just want to see if i got what it takes to be me for peeps ya know... be sides all i do is write about the thigs i know so its about time i let peeps know who i am

    :coffee: Gen~ETHIC Soul
     
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    welcome welcome

    :new: welcome to destee.com quiet flowz
    tyte reality flow let us know as u scribe
    welcome inside the family of love and peace :huh:
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    thanks for such a warm welcom really i appreciate this site soo much... down here in albany there's no place to go and listen nor speak so im just trying to ya know flow...
    :blush: :thanks:

    Gen~ETHIC SOUL
     
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    let da ink run and have fun
    as we embrace ya scribe as u vibe
    check us out in chat too at
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    we be flowin there poetry open mic friday nights
    and having classic on all kind of topics
    happy to have u upon us do ya thing let ya pen
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    thanks for sharing...and keep flowing..
    i understand ..took me a minute or two to let go and share...but keep on..
    good for the soul...spirit...mind...thanks again...
     
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    :wave: :wave: Welcome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    I love your flow, GeneticSoul. Glad you're here! Look forward to seein more from ya.
     
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    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks i wish i could reply to all of these great words im reading man they are all so wonder ful i feel like im at a buffet
     
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