Black Poetry : Like This And Like That

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by true love, Sep 18, 2003.

  1. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I wanna know you like this
    Where your coming from
    Where you're going
    Who you're taking with you
    I wanna know you like that
    Your feelings and perspective
    What makes you happy
    What makes you sad
    I wanna see you like this
    When you wanna cry
    When you wanna scream
    When you smile so hard your busting at the seam
    I wanna see you like that
    With your eyes closed deep in sleep
    When you're having a nightmare or a silly dream
    When a song comes on the radio that makes you think deep
    I wanna touch you like this
    With the words that I speak or write
    Running my fingers through your dreds as you sleep tight
    Or massaging your shoulders when you've had a bad night
    I wanna touch you like that
    And make you dream of a future together
    And make you wonder how you ever
    Made it this far without me
    I wanna kiss you like this
    As we lay on my sheets
    You sharing my pillow with me
    And we talk about silly things
    I wanna kiss you like that
    And be surprised every time
    At how good your lips feel against mine
    And the way you do what you do
    I wanna love you like this
    And let you know I'm TRUE
    My love is only for you
    I'm totally down for you
    I wanna love you like that
    And forever be all you need
    If only my mind you could read
    You would know. :love:
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice very nice
    dis and dat
    we all want to know...
    i feel dis flow
     
  3. mkhaya lo'

    mkhaya lo' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm loving this piece like you cannot believe...really, like this and like that..

    lo'
     
  4. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you so much mzblkangel...i'm glad you're feeling it.
     
  5. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mkhaya lo'...thank you thank you thank you...this was just something i was feeling this morning.
     
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    " I wanna know you like this "
    Break it down my sweet


    " Where your coming from "
    Towards you so we can meet
    My thoughts are every where
    and no place sometimes at all.

    " Where you're going "
    Any where the you suggest the call.
    I'm open
    I can catch a plane.
    Ride a horse.
    Play in the rain.

    " Who you're taking with you"
    No one special just being me.
    Sharing life and thoughts of thee.

    " What makes you happy "
    You would be surprised
    I'm easy to please.
    I work hard and strive.
    To make you smile.
    It makes me happy.
    Knowing I did that.


    " What makes you sad "
    This is something strange.
    I get sad when others are sad.
    Cause if were laughing there
    is nothing wrong.
    Nothing taking our time.

    " When you wanna cry "
    You will know.. but you
    may not see a tear.
    It will show and I don't hide it.

    " When you smile so hard your busting at the seam "
    I like feeling like this. I smile when you smile..
    Cause your happy.
    Then we laugh out loud
    without a word being said..
    Cause we are enjoying the whole thing.

    " With your eyes closed deep in sleep "
    You can kiss my eye lids.. I like butterfly kisses.

    " When you're having a nightmare or a silly dream"
    I have lots of silly dreams some of them seem so real.
    I even feel kisses. I go good places and do fun things.


    " When a song comes on the radio that makes you think deep"
    Yea.. I don't mind these times. i would share how it makes me feel and think. You would know by the volume I turn it up to.

    ' And make you wonder how you ever
    Made it this far without me "
    I am wondering where have you been.
    I have been waiting all my life.

    " And forever be all you need
    If only my mind you could read "

    I CAN read your mind. :love:
     
  7. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hodee...
    you know me so well
    where this is going i just can't tell
    but i know one thing for sure
    i don't need a cure
    for the love sickness i feel in my heart
    noone could ever tear me apart
    from the sweet words and vibes you send me
    yes i'm feeling you are you feeling me?
    read my mind and do your thing
    i wanna be the song you sing
    that you feel so deep in your soul
    i wanna be the missing piece to your whole
    i wanna be that silly dream
    that makes you laugh in your sleep
    i wanna be the sadness in your heart
    that makes you weep
    i wanna be the happiness, the twinkle in your eye
    i wanna be your last thought before you go to bed at night
    but ofcourse you knew all this already
    cause you can read my mind
    LOL
     
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    renee31127 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :flamet: :bomb:
     
  9. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL! thanks renee.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Well isn't this delicious. ;)