Black Poetry : Like the other side of the pillow

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Kimdricka, Dec 27, 2002.

  1. Kimdricka

    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When you're asleep in your bed at night
    And you wake up for some reason: nightmares, worries, or fright
    And you stick your hand under your pilllow
    ~ yeaahh~ right there in the middle

    And you go to a smooth and cool place that

    Moves you, grooves you
    Pleases you, Appeases you
    Entices you, Invite you

    To c'mon in and be 1 @ ease.....That's me, just like the other side of the pillow
     
  2. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    smooth as silk right hea.
    :wave: :wave: :wave:
    make yourself at home...you fit right in!

    1:heart:
    2fish
     
  3. Twofish

    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok 1st question - I stay in Norcross, GA but am moving to Buckhead soon, originally from Detroit
    2nd - there are 2 reasons: I am a pisces and I represent the miracle (2 fish and 5 loaves) get it ;)

    Peace and Love
     
  4. Legendof_1_Spirit

    Legendof_1_Spirit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...>floats in>

    Very nice work poet!
    And I agree, very smooth.

    From one Georgian/ATLien to another, welcome friend.

    Keep the words moving.

    <floats out<...
     
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    Kimdricka Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you know what? i'm a pisces too, girl! and i like the way you look at being a pisces as far as representing the miracle. you just opened me up some more. again, thanks for your help. have a blessed one. ;)
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Many Blessings to you!!! I feel your natural piscean tendencies through your flow - scribe on sista!

    and Legend - don't tell me we live in the same spot! 4 real?

    1:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome to da flow of destee place upon family & friendz
    ya flow is awesome ........keep flowin !
    as i send top flyte luv at ya my brutha
     
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    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Loveded it! Two snaps and a booty clap!

    Yeah, and yeah again! I love that piece cause it's universal. Short and sweet but so complete you got it girl don't let nobody tell you different...and you won't hear it around here we gone prop ya to death...Whew...I will be changing my sheets to achieve that cool spot tonight! LOL:D WELCOME

    Blessings On Ya House!:grouphug:
     
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    Nice....:)
     
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