Black Poetry : like the morning

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by wildflower7, Jul 2, 2001.

  1. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i awoke this morning to
    a lovely cool breezy summer morning
    washing over my body
    giving me a refreshing chill
    like a long drink of cold water
    on a blistering hot day
    i embraced the glory of it all
    the bright yellow sunshine
    bright blue sky
    caress of the soft breeze
    and cotton candy clouds lingering by
    i bask in it on the balcony
    as you watch me from our bed
    calling to me to wash over you
    like the morning
    and gladly i do
    because i love making love to you
    like this
    in the morning
    only to fall into a deeper sleep
    thereafter
    in the comfort of your arms.
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wash over him, then...

    let the dew of your womanhood flow copiciously over him...bathing him in the silky smoothness of your woman kiss...drenching him under the waterfall of your secret dew. love him, -7...and in the seventh hour, REST.:)

    Peace.
     
  3. poeticdelight

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    Girrrrrrl

    now that's a good feeling


    WHEW!

    pd
     
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    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wildflower, dear poetess...this is very nicely written. lovin' it! keep on scribin'...i see you bloomin', gurl.

    ~~~inkdrops~~~
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i read this

    now i'm in recovery

    sweet stuff, no doubt
     
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    wf7

    Now this is peace and serenity...

    :heart: is in the air
     
  7. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i sho am glad y'all was feelin this
    hope u got the feelin of complete
    refreshing love...
    and the afterglow....
    -7:spinstar:
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wild

    That was absolutely lovely!!!

    Respect
    Reas
     
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    girl u know i wee you so keep skribben
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MY FLOWER

    U HAVE AWAKEN IN FULL BLOOM
    AND BLOSSOM INTO A LOVE
    UNTOUCHABLE GURL YA ON POINT
    LOVIN DES ..........................:heart: :kiss: :heart:
     
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