Black Poetry : Like That.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MzBlkAngel, Aug 13, 2004.

  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want to escape…..
    Across the starz, beyond the horizon, pass the orbs
    ………Just
    Take me to passion and release my stormy desires,
    Can you?
    Like that?
    Set like wild fire…
    Move me to no return….
    Shall we?
    Bring light…where there is dark
    Create the rainbow…
    Maybe right maybe wrong…..
    Opening my wings….as I fly to you
    Will you?
    Lift the heavens and turn the earth….
    For my spirit yearns yours
    As your soul pulls mine
    Mold me enhance my senses…
    Can you?
    Erase destiny and make our own
    Taste the essence of me…spread it on thick
    Like whip cream…..
    Up in the sky high above the clouds scream
    Like thunder……as romance is claimed
    Like that or this?
    You invaded my soul and take my breath
    Do you know if you’re my truth?
    Make me your desire…
    And watch the flame…soar
    Feel me
    Can you?
    Upon the edge of the sea shore
    Where our bodies meet and play
    In a day dream
    The wind blows through my hair
    As you take my hand…..and lead the way
    Can you?
    Like that?
    Watch…..
    Reflections of us…Dance in the rain
    Inside the moon
    In a far of place in the enchanting garden
    As you take my hand..
    And lead my desires in this fire
    Passion lays and the earth sings..
    Can you?
    Like that?

    (C) 2004
    a blkangel thang!!!
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was smokin tyte u really out did ya self on dis one ladie wow!
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow its like that...QQ...thank you Richie Rich happy you loving it!!!! :kiss:
    my mind went drifting.....thanks again....Angel
     
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    :wave: Heyyyy! Over here!
    :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot: :hot:

    OooooH Sista! This is Hot!!!!!
    What you mixing in those thoughts!

    Outstanding Drop!!!!!!!!!
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank sis for the love on dis...
    just flowing..got to drifting.....Angel
     
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    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    oooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOO

    Yes, baby...yes, baby...yes, baby....oops...wrong woman. Sorry. :lol:

    :thanks: for sharing this piece with us. It's :maddd: tight. :wink:

    :toast:
     
  7. Lloyd

    Lloyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah

    I like ur poem,itz something really epic!Feeling this way is feeling THE way!The girl,i'm sure,is really exceptionnal!Keep ya flow comin'
     
  8. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you money for the love and support....QQ sweetie you got issues i see...but i still love ya!!!!


    Lloyd..thank you for the support and lovehappy you enjoyed..

    Peace
    Angel
     
  9. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :read: This was off the chain tight angel loved the whole flow. Pulled this one out ys lefe side pocket huh? QQ :laugh:
     
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    This was fire fo sho'. I gots to give you your props. I was diggin' this here. Nice drop, much luv sistah.