Black Poetry : Like Soda

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by 1poetsought, Jan 30, 2003.

  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I so much like the way
    Tiny bubbles spray a kiss
    With that pop- you can't miss
    Its familiar ~ little hiss

    Like cola ***
    Fizz is really hip
    Uncola... albinos are a trip

    Designed me a flavor...
    Exotic jelly bean
    Black- and blood pressured
    I'm deemed a crime scene

    I like soda***
    Thumbs-up want a hit?
    White water...
    He ain't buying it

    Pride in the news
    Love everyone we lose
    Those locked-down in pews
    For drugs the devil used...

    Like soda***



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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    like soda
    u flowed a bliss
    from da hiss of dis

    nice vibe u scribe
    as i take dis ride
    roll on !
     
  3. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cool. I liked this. But what was the word edited out?
     
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    Sista Steele, don't make trouble*** those were bubbles.

    $$RICH$$, nice rhyme... thanks! 1poetsought
     
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