Black Poetry : Like Rain

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hour after hour
    day by day
    teardrops run
    like rain

    my heart of love
    is fill with pain
    i no longer
    have my son
    to claim

    left dis world
    headed home
    in GOD's house
    where he belong

    gave me many smile
    gentle embrace
    dear son
    i now have a vacant space
    a void unheard of
    a pain so new
    now here 2 care
    for your two
    baby boy
    tiny sweet gurl
    i have to bring up
    in dis crazy world

    like rain da tears fall
    that night when GOD
    made his call

    yet i smile at half staff
    wit no shame
    u r my son
    for all your good
    a young man
    down by da hand
    of another blk man
    life taken
    rip from dad
    left two children
    ever so young

    tears fall down my cheeks
    knowing deep within
    someday we will meet again
    so hard to say goodby
    so i'll say see u when i get there
    see u not in this life
    but the next
    rest dear one
    rest my son
    no more hurt & pain u face
    just u left an empty space
    so i caress da memories
    hold the good day
    I LOVE U
    for GOD cares he so loved u more

    EMOTIONALLY down..

    R.I.P Dyrell (REDD) 7/14/80 - 8/28/02
    :cry:
     
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    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we belong not to ourself nor others. i dare not to give words of comfort because i know your pain is far surpass words and only God can be what is needed in times like these. allow God to shower his Holy spirit upon u and there will u find some peace .... and your beloved son. may God continue to have mercy
     
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    LURK Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow $$RICH$$, this is mad deep....
    i'm tryin ta feel u on ur level man, but ur way too far down fo' me bro.....
    but this poem really has such a good meanin'.....
    man, tight piece dawg.....very tight....
     
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    story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    their forth da light
    unto thou child brings smiles
    let not the heart be of pain
    forth i am da way
    now my mind rest in peace
    yet i weep!
    thanks y'all for feeling what dis broken heart my feel

    Herlove .......thanks ya word is comfort
     
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    da pain one has is a pain unheard of
    family y'all been a great backbone
     
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    ((((hugs)))))

    you'll get through it...continue to pray

    pd
     
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    prayer heard through my whispers
    forth my heart stain a pain untouched
    Thanks ....PD
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    feeling ya pain poet
    but please let the good times consume you
    for they are to cherish

    peace poet

    and mad love and respect for you

    DSS
     
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    So'ja indeed that's all i have left to consume is sweet memories
    and i cherish it wit pride .....Thankz these words help

    mad love @ ya my brutha wit high respect
     
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