Black Poetry : Like Rain

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  1. soulful2006

    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is no sun shining on me like rain
    I know the feeling all too well
    Like you and I are stars but we dont shine
    We give to eachother piece of mind
    Like rain to an earth barren and dry
    Like the moon and stars you light up
    My night sky
    Like the rain the pours
    Like no other before
    Like something new to explore
    you are here
    And in the late night I fear
    That I practice what I preach all too well
    Like the winds during a storm
    Our love excels almost too fast
    So fast at times I fear I can not breath
    But the smooth sound of tranquility found
    As the rain cascades down
    As sit in the window
    Listening to something smooth and slow
    Thinking you should be hear
    So I may fall upon you ever quiet ever still
    Knowing you will
    Return to me
    So I sit letting my love come down
    Like Rain
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is such a nice piece keep flowing.
     
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    nice visuals poet............flow on!!
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    once again thanks for the love
     
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    every drop that fall
    is a new beckon call
    from the heart it pour
    to the depth of core
    let it rain inside da beauty
    from da soul so truely
    i feel the drppplets crashing
    deep within awaiting da
    love once again

    i really love this smooth soft flow like rain
     
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    Wow, this flowed so serenely and genuinely, I could almost see love's rain. Wonderful scribe poet.
     
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    Really like the analogy of the rain and your love...very powerful imagery.
     
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    soulful2006 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you once again to everyone who is showing this young sistah so much love right now. It really is beautiful.
     
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    I enjoyed this flow..nice write Poet!!!
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh!!!
    This is:great:
    I love it.
    :hearts1: :hearts1:
     
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