Black Poetry : Like Rain

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  1. Soullyricist

    Soullyricist Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I want to love you in ways that would pierce the wind like rain
    I want your comfort zone to be between my bosom and your pleasure zone between my thighs
    And those masculine sighs you sigh make me cry our love like rain
    We love storms in our mist
    We consistently love and make storms our strength
    You pour like the thickness of thunder
    And my insides douse like the wetness of rain
    Lightning bears our name in it’s sharp clefts
    And it’s cracks make us whole
    You love me like storms and release my pain
    I love you so strong
    That we pierce the wind and fall like rain



    © Tawanda Roberson
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful...
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :eek:..that was soo tyte......
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and i want ya love
    top hold me in grasp
    like da windz blowin
    and caress my mental
    i want ya heart to be
    filled with compassion
    to gently fulfill da desires
    of a blissful raptuer
    in the sweet dew of morning
    as the sun take to the warmth
    of our beings
    as for every drop of rain
    i want it to be of joy
    and wrap ya limbs around me
    pull me in closer and closer
    to a tender hello of ya body
    motions and curves
    i want too.........................
    tyte scribe i had to jump in !!!
     
  5. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this piece.. " We consistently love and make storms our strength " Thunder and Lighting.... Boom.. Boom.. Crackle.. Crackle.. I like the rain.
     
  6. aqueenpassing

    aqueenpassing Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Now this was tight"! "I sure do love th rain myself.... Feeling ya fo sho

    Blessings
    AqueenPassing
    :wave:
     
  7. Alizentang

    Alizentang Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece was so strong, yet so sensual. Lovin this!

    :heart:Alize:heart:
     
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