Black Poetry : Like i promise a warm splash

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    From da east winds
    i blow unto u wit
    warmth & glow a
    sweet affection
    a blazzin love so u
    know ya heart is hug
    dancing radaint starz
    cross into ya soul
    like da glisting grain
    a sparkle light up
    from ya treasure smile
    warm desires released
    my soul tap dance tonight
    to feel ya heart's delight
    as my mind take me on this
    journey da vision clear
    caressing ya body dear
    comforting ya middle passage
    wit tender lovin care
    in a sweep of my hand
    gently da compromise made
    as da splash of da pools
    of love cascade inward
    outward ya emotions flow
    to a love hearts lone to know
    ova da rain bow i stand
    with grace and vows in my plain
    to honoe and respect
    love in direct , so u feel da affect
    of one's move in da night from
    above within ya golden beauty
    the essence of black pearls bling
    so listen to my heart sing
    to sign thy name beyond da candle
    like i promise dis warm splash
    so u know i am who i am !
    love from above blessin thee :luv:

    to u my friend :spinn:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwww she gone love dis....tight
    very tight love you when you on dis wave vibe :flirt:

    peace
    angel
     
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    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww............................................... :blush:
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    INDEED ANGEL BIG THANKZ I ALWAYS KEEP MY PROMISE
    AND MAKE DUE ON DA SPLASH !

    TOYLIN BLUSH ON SISTAH I NEVER BREAK A PROMISE
    AS DIS RAIN IN DRIPS UPON U HAPPY U ENJOYED THE
    SPLASH !
     
  5. toylin

    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you, $$RICH$$. I'm actually speechless! My own poem.. Awwww.........
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    honored and most humble welcome sistah !
     
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    Lovely tribute to toylin.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nothing like a promise kept. This was a lovely vibe, and I'm sure toylin is beyond pleased with its beauty.
     
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    toylin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very, very pleased! :) My own poem *sigh*
     
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    thankz poetrymama it was indeed to a worthy sistah Queen as promised

    thankz watz u know i keep my promises always hope she like it i try !

    sistah Queen T do enjoy ya flow my sistah !
     
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