Black Poetry : Like I don't exist!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by HODEE, Mar 2, 2004.

  1. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I was looking for a cause of the trouble when I stumbled on this information bubble. Remember when you had a fight. With the other team after the game that night.

    It used to be don't come to my town. Win or loose I'm going to put you down. Then some labeled it for black and brown. So now I can't visit that part of town.

    Society condoning hunger and death. Human domination. Control in it's self. Not liking this man. That man nor her. Treating those different, that wasn't born there.

    Cruel people surrounding my life. It is horrible.. it's in the skys. I can see thru my ancestors eyes.

    Now calm down.. it's not that bad.. Don't you tell me to be glad. Robbing others of life and limb. Then you tell me to love you still.

    Then my people taking on a shade of gray. Should we get back to black someway. Passing the madness.. psycho - babble into the heads of young.

    Projecting identification of self into others. Gives you power, to think. You say live up or down to an expected level. If I need to drink. From the fountain you profess. All the gold and water rest. On your side. Fighting forces back and forth. This is madness. Stop the stealth.

    Take a look at what was said. He is playing in your head. Men taking advantage of women. Men taking advantage of men. Nations over nations spinning never ends.

    No regard of gender..first it must put something in you. Excrements.. words..deeds and such. This has taken us out of touch. Made up reasons why you treat me. Like I don't exist.

    Cause you act. Doesn't mean I have to react. It has been proven you lose. Say what you will, continue to denigrate me fool. Your scapegoating unwanted aspects of yourself.
     
  2. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    tru indeed brotha hodee...
    they just don't get it yet...
    God will show them in the end...word
    one love
    khasm
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice one
    and on point
    flow on....
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so so on point
    they better wake up
    lovin dis one
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was an eye opener here. Write some more.
     
  6. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW...

    Brother Hodee...this was truly food for thought
    You made me consider and re-consider a lot
    of my views, this particular line truly grabbed
    my attention...

    Continue on Brother...I'm listening
     
  7. deepy

    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    brother hodee
    voice with consciousness
    speak on....
    thanks ...
     
  8. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    brother u continut to awaken the minds slumbering and give it a purpose to rage into the storm.
     
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