Black Poetry : Like How You Eat It

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Aug 22, 2001.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cream-filled
    Chocolate tube
    Melted icing running from the tip
    Into your mouth
    Tasting so good as you lick your lip
    Holding the bottom with your hand
    Savoring the sweetness cause you understand
    You taste it with anticipation
    From throat to teeth
    You take it all with loving care
    Oh so sweetly you eat
    A chocolate eclair

    BE

    (c) Bruce H. Edwards, 2001
     
  2. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man you had me going with this one.........
     
  3. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thoroughly enjoyed

    this read......:)

    a
     
  4. ShadeeLadee

    ShadeeLadee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    um....

    from now on...when I do this: "P"....that means I ain't got no kosher response, and I'm gonna just be printing!...for my ...um...purposes, with Mr. Tee. :wink:

    thank you!

    SWT
     
  5. klabarron

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    smooth! really smooth! especially to a krispy kream man like myself. i was gaining weight with each line. really cool piece poet!
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    B.


    .... there you go againnn!! i lovedid it!

    :)
    SunShyne~
     
  7. Kitana

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    you are an artist

    you painted this picture well....
    reading and waiting for the climactic ending..

    K
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    WOOOOWEEEEEE!! BE................

    YA ON DA MOOD AND ON TARGET
    SAY IT ! SAY IT ! SAY IT !:toast:
     
  9. N2urSoul

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    BE

    I love the way you lead me on with your wordz!

    Scribe your thoughts POET, scribe on...


    Nice work.
     
  10. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Poets. Ain't nothing like a good pastry.

    BE