Black Poetry : ...Like Bliss

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by epiphany, Dec 19, 2008.

  1. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like Bliss​


    He said he loves me

    ...the sun shined brighter
    kissing me with gentle breezes
    like the sweetness of his kiss
    ....his scent of masculinity
    enhance the fragrance of his cologne
    when he holds me near

    .....Luther sang for me
    melting the silkiness of his voice on me
    while my lover's gentle hands
    caresses me

    He gives me peace
    like the tranquility of a running brook
    he soothes the inner me
    leaving me feeling fly & sexy
    like a saxophone solo
    in the midst of a storm

    he made my dreams his reality
    lift my spirit to the stratosphere
    with intellectual conversation
    and witty wordplay

    he challenges my womanly prowess

    He awakens mystery
    when he pleases me, teases me
    in the wee hours of the morning
    when sleep escapes me
    I never know what man I wake up to
    when his brown eyes search
    my brown eyes
    and
    I
    just
    know

    I'm in love
    if it feels

    ....like bliss



    epiphany:heart:
     
  2. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    i like i like

    now that's really real right der poet

    say no more

    lol

    :pool:
     
  3. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ... last verse sets the whole thing off.

    " He awakens mystery... "

    i feelz it.
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow, this was absolutely heavenly. Every relationship should be such bliss. Beautiful write poetess.
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaa....dat's purity in motion ....i could run away this this flow wow
    yeah dat's love like bliss indeed .....awesome scribing sistah whewww
     
  6. HODEE

    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm loving it!
    Morning symphony

    Epiphany

    Poetess Grace
    One with Destiny.
    We love that you
    With us all Destee...Family
     
  7. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    if ever...

    ...There be
    Reason
    To question the season of
    My love for you

    I’ll go

    For
    Nothing stronger
    Holds me together
    As my love
    For you

    I love you

    “let me love you (RIGHT)
    If only for one night…”

    I’ll never try
    To do the things that lovers do
    But I’ll always be true
    TO YOU
    To hold you
    In the deepest parts of me
    To love you
    Effortlessly
    And endlessly
    The way my soul
    …and heart
    Can see

    If
    Only
    You were here
    With me


    BEAUTIFULLY DONE, POETESS
    (drowning in your bliss.:wine:)
     
  8. epiphany

    epiphany Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey Soja,

    you know I dig when you flow thru....

    and you didn't even notice...did you? :SuN025:

    whispering--->I put the prefix in...~:wink:

    thanx for reading and responding....:hearts4:


    ******

    And you know I loves when you feelz it Jhiah...thanx :love:


    ******

    It's all love...Watz, it's all love. I appreciate your words....thank u.


    ******

    Your $Richness$ comin from the "love doctor" I consider your words
    complimentary...I appreciate you feelin me on this.

    ******

    Morning symphony...wow Hodee, I like that..what a lovely title
    that would be to a poem. I'm going to have to work on that one.

    Thank you....and I :love: being back with my poetic family....

    ******

    Baller,

    Your lovely wordz have me speechless, no flow
    to reciprocate, just a feelin of.....well....bliss.

    As always your verbiage is a treat....thanx for reading me.


    epiphany:heart:
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Like Bliss..."

    I was able to experience with each verse I drank in.

    I even found myself inhaling when I read,
    A man in some good cologne can do some damage!

    Anyhooo, this was a sweet piece of poetry
    and baller's flow was a special treat!


    MaddSistahlyLove!
    Coco:heart:
     
  10. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Poetry at its finest...
    Want to know what love feels like
    read the experience
    wonderfully flowed poet...
     
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