Black Poetry : Like Adam And Eve

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  1. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    biting the apple of
    forbidden fruit

    giving into temptation

    you sway

    straying away thoughtlessly

    as often as mother nature
    baring fruit on the stem of
    an apple tree

    ungratefully making an
    effort to pray on your
    hands and knees

    brother please

    how often will you
    die to save me

    i love you
    yet continuosly

    you stray away
    from me giving your
    love to honeybees

    how long will it
    take for you to see

    that rotten apples
    lead only to greed

    await me love
    your destiny




    apt copyright 2001
     
  2. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    walk away from forbidden fruit...

    and leave rotten apples alone.:)

    when you feel yourself falling, look to me...i'll be there...FOR YOU.
     
  3. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    not a real life situation...

    but it could be

    thanx for the read baller

    pd
     
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    AACOOLDRE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The fruit on the trees. Some are good and some are bad. In the book of Job, Job had hope in a tree that would heal his suffering.
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    PD

    i lovededid it

    loving the flava
    moral to the story?


    >DSS
     
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