Black Poetry : Like A Song

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Desert Storm, Oct 24, 2005.

  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 31, 2001
    Messages:
    1,662
    Likes Received:
    29
    Ratings:
    +31
    Keep keepin on
    Keep leapin on
    Keep runnin on and longin on
    Like a sweet sweet singing song
    Keep rock rockin on
    And freak freakin on
    And keep steap steapin on
    Like a easy song
    Like a lovely song
    Like a street anthem
    These are the rules
    Must I repeat
    These are lifes obstacles
    That you must exercise control
    Challenges will change you
    Keep rearrangin you
    Keep daring you
    Keep flarin you
    Be awarin you
    Keep snarin you
    Catching you up in a twenty two
    So strong like a leap in the future
    So dope like the rigamaroe of the preacha
    So steaper
    So swiftin to the kitchen
    Fa some lifes too hot to handle
    So they bow down
    And let it rule them down
    Whateva ya do
    I keep feeling you
    Hope for another tommorrow
    Even through my sorrow
    Gotta come again
    One more time to begin
    My love breathe again
    My love sing again
    My love be again
    Then bring again
    Come forth from within
    Soul stand tall
    Reach, keep reaching within
    Through the pressure
    that festers
    Keep holdin on then out
    Then up and down and up again
    Whateva through any kind of weathers
    Believe
    Keep vibe vibing again
    Like a song....

    D.S.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2001
    Messages:
    69,983
    Likes Received:
    3,978
    Gender:
    Male
    Occupation:
    BUSINESS owner
    Location:
    Da~WINDY*CITY //CHICAGO
    Ratings:
    +4,178
    ya pen on fire today wow !
     
  3. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 31, 2001
    Messages:
    1,662
    Likes Received:
    29
    Ratings:
    +31
    I'm inspired because of Common Senses new album, right now I'm flowing to the song entitled Real People ha haha. I didn't know you waz from chi city till I just noticed on ya name ha ha ha. da windy city what a trip . My poem Chicago man is actually written for a friend that inspired me who's from chi city hee, hee, hee. you deep real deep man
    thanks rich
    D.S.
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Oct 4, 2003
    Messages:
    16,340
    Likes Received:
    114
    Location:
    Northeast
    Ratings:
    +122
    Come what may, like a song, we keep reaching, keep striving, keep singing. I enjoyed the flow of this.
     
  5. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Joined:
    Jun 19, 2005
    Messages:
    3,872
    Likes Received:
    134
    Gender:
    Female
    Occupation:
    working to own my plus size empire.....
    Location:
    I'm a Georgia Peach!!!!
    Ratings:
    +135
    but yet another fine flow flow on Desert Storm
     
  6. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Aug 26, 2003
    Messages:
    12,660
    Likes Received:
    191
    Location:
    somewhere ova da rainbow....
    Ratings:
    +219
    enjoyed the flow......
     
  7. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Mar 31, 2001
    Messages:
    1,662
    Likes Received:
    29
    Ratings:
    +31
    thanks gurls ... for feeling me this time. bless ya
     
  8. ASHANTA

    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

    Country:
    United States
    Joined:
    Jan 15, 2003
    Messages:
    1,859
    Likes Received:
    69
    Location:
    Brooklyn N. Y.
    Ratings:
    +70
    The emotion in your lyrics has great moods, the rythmic style of your lyrics I see book money, the language comes from the heart, and the clarity speaks of peace, in a summary of great love, you have really develop these lyrics, you might think of selling them to a producer, your creativity is great and should be added to sound track, it is full of clarity and emotions of the heart.
     
Loading...