Black Poetry : Like A Rose

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Dlovely, Dec 23, 2005.

  1. Dlovely

    Dlovely Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Soar like an eagle,
    Run like the wind,
    Race across the plains,
    My soul is on the mend.

    Life is like a fine wine,
    That's all that I can say.
    It keeps getting better,
    With every blessed day.

    Even though I'm still young
    I have seen alot.
    I've learned when to hold my tongue,
    And when to talk.

    I stare out my window,
    Watching as it rains.
    Not listening to anybody,
    Just thinking about my pain.

    But it keeps getting better,
    For that is how life goes,
    Starting as a small green bud,
    Blooming like a rose.
     
  2. ibrahim

    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The life of a Rose..
    this was tight
     
  3. soblessed

    soblessed Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :great: I am really feeling this piece. Tight flow
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awesome drop of a rose
     
  5. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nice drop poet
    You laid it out
    For us too enjoy
    Nice piece poet
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a very nice piece enjoyed the flow, flow on poet.:star:
     
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    Starting out small, and blooming into something beautiful. Enjoyed your flow.
     
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